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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2023 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great erotic short story, a favorite. Love how she can have a casual conversation with the shrinkie she knows and still, after finding out how he has wrongfully made into a Chum, she still ate him like he was just a piece of food. Also like the time element factor as she tries to time his eating to her expected sexual rendezvous.

Reviewer: Krauser Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 04 2013 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome story. Like girlfood said I love it when the pred is someone the prey used or still knows and I lie the idea of people being sold as food too.

 

When can we expect more?



Author's Response:

I am working on more stories right now, but they are longer. I usually do short one shots, but lately I've been working on novel length things and don't want to post before I've finished most of it.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

My all time favourite of my own stories is where widowed teacher Mrs Long mistakes a shrunken student for some sort of pixie or goblin, announces her plans to eat him, learns that he's really her student, and later announces that she's going to eat him anyway.

This tale of yours is the closest anyone else has come to creating the same sensation from the shrinkie's POV.

Keep it coming, my friend. You've captured the changes over time for the characters and the nostalgia for old school days really well too. Obviously she couldn't have romanced him and still been faithful to her husband, so you've pleased both Christians and vore fans alike with this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words. It was a piece I felt compelled to write. I'm going to try to read more of your work when I can. You have an impressive body of literature under your belt though. I need to read more when the kid naps.

Reviewer: girlfood Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2013 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic! I love it when a trusted friend becomes the consumer.



Author's Response:

It is one of my favorite scenarios. I like the character to get a false sense of security.

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