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Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2013 8:53 PM Title: fairy

Another poet at last! Now I'm not the only one.

I just posted a tale about Demons too (Well I posted the first 2 of at least 10 chapters anyway) called "Louise Waters and the Private Directive. It'll be vastly different from this piece.

I think the bit I really liked was the "with a swash of her tongue she took a large gulp" if one pretends it was a schoolteacher doing it to a shrunken student, instead of a fairy and a demon.



Author's Response:

why thank, though im not the strongest poet, im glad you liked it

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2013 7:01 PM Title: fairy

Stranger then strange, bluer then blue, the poor lil'demon

fell into the goo....

The fairy's all fluttered, and spread their huge wings

flew off to the heavans and waited till spring.....

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