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Reviewer: Hula_Daisy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2016 12:08 AM Title: First Day Stress

I like this story I hope you continue it soon

Reviewer: Woobles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2016 11:04 PM Title: First Day Stress

I love this story and I REALLY hope you continue !

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2015 12:45 PM Title: First Day Stress

For a 1st story written, you rock from the start! Good to see Dan to face Lexi's attitude.Hoping to see some more background (what happen about relationship like husband-wife, brother-sister, etc...). please continue your work.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2015 8:58 PM Title: First Day Stress

I like this story so far. It has a very realistic feel to it. Too many writers forget about that. These shrunken men have sisters, mothers, grandmothers, girlfriends, etc. The women have fathers, brothers, sons, boyfriends, etc. It's unrealistic that those people would torture their. loved ones just because they are suddenly bigger.
I like how you address these feelings between people after such event. The girl that misses her normal size father and normal sized boyfriends, feels realistic.
The worlds normal sized population is cut in half wich make the world more peacefull.
Thanks for putting in the effort what kind of impact such a event could have on our world.

 

 

 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 7:10 PM Title: First Day Stress

Any new chapters planned?

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 3:22 PM Title: First Day Stress

Any more plans to update this ?

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 2:05 PM Title: First Day Stress

Ya, looking forward to seeing what it's like durring the school day too... Will also be interesting to see how the other girls get along too, & maybe get introduced to some new girls and guys too.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2014 7:36 PM Title: First Day Stress

Great to see an update... Like many on here, was hoping this story would continue.

Reviewer: Ultradude306 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2014 2:38 PM Title: First Day Stress

Really hoping you keepbupdating this! :)

Reviewer: Ultradude306 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2014 3:54 PM Title: First Day Stress

Are you still thinking of working on this story?

Reviewer: Ultradude306 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2013 9:27 PM Title: First Day Stress

REALLY like this story shofar!... Please continue it when you can.

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2013 5:55 PM Title: First Day Stress

Hope you continue this story someday, I am really liking it.

You are using a very interesting scenario. Also exploring some very exciting ideas I find hard to find in most stories I read. Enjoyed very much the butt teasing at the end. Hope there is more of it. Hah n.n

Reviewer: wowie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2013 11:41 PM Title: First Day Stress

on @ least 5 occasions, including the pointed out 1, rules #2&3 were broken. wow

 



Author's Response: Would you notice that if you were in Dans situation?

Reviewer: pasret4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2013 9:25 PM Title: First Day Stress

You have done a great introduction to characters, both tiny boys and normal sized girls, as well as their interactions with each other. I can't wait for the next chapter to come and see what interesting characters that you have in mind, keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: Cortex Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 9:33 PM Title: First Day Stress

I like the premise of the story so far,  just add some more spacing inbetween the paragraphs of the second chapter, I understand you wrote it from your Iphone so it may have been a little harder to tell.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 2:13 AM Title: First Day Stress

So far so good, i'll be looking forward to new chapters.

Reviewer: Ultradude306 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2013 2:56 PM Title: First Day Stress

Awesome story man! Keep it up. I've actually wrote a few stories basd on a similar concept to the one you have here, so if you need any ideas, feel free to check them out... Also agree with the others on how there should better than one guy, as it would be a little more interesting and open up more possibilities . Maybe if you wanted, you could have the one guy start off on their own, and add other guys later?

Author's Response: That's exactly what I was planning. Dan is part of the testing period, but if things go well with him I will add more characters. Also, the next chapter could help solve that.

Reviewer: newschool2626 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2013 2:16 PM Title: First Day Stress

I think you've got a really good concept and am looking to see where you go with this. I think it would have made much more sense to have more than just one guy attend the all girl school in a world where all the men have shrunken, but I understand wanting to personalize it with one character. Still, you could have had the other male characters just be in the background, like getting mentioned by other girls, or your main character watching in horror as he hides and sees another male student getting dropped into the back of her panties while no one else is around, but still have the story completely from his perspective. Plus, it would be harder for the teachers to keep track of several tiny male students as opposed to just one. I know shrinking is unrealistic, but you set it up in a very realistic way, but if they wanted to test out how the girl-boy interactions would be in a school with the male gender's new size, they would at least have a handful of guys (literally) do it.

Still looking forward to what comes next though!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2013 10:44 AM Title: First Day Stress

Well, judging from the litany of content descriptors, I'd guess that his roommates will run the usual emotional gamut for giantesses. Domineering, as a rule; gentle and caring, as an exception.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2013 3:09 AM Title: First Day Stress

There could have been a bit more detail, as it was short, but it's a decent introduction nonetheless.

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