[Report This]Date: October 03 2015 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
BEST.STORY.EVERa281;a281;a281;Great ending considering im really into the unaware stuff. If you cana292; please contact me by email jeffdong2009@gmail.com
[Report This]Date: July 03 2013 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have been lurking on this site for years, but this is one of the best stories i have read in a very long time.
Date: July 02 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
You have a fairly original concept here, but it can be difficult to follow at times due to the heavy use of the ellipsis (or the three dots), and that you did not indicate who was speaking.
here is an example of one way you can make it clear who is speaking.
“Well … I guess you’ve had your chance …” said Nikki.
And remember, every time you switch characters make sure to start a new paragraph.
congrads on uploading your first story I hope to see more of you in the future.
Author's Response:
I got my bad habbits and i know that, but it's hard to get rid of them.
I can just keep trying ;)
[Report This]Date: June 30 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well done dude, this is one of the best story Iv ever read for ... years ?
I love the size ; imagine you right ahead of toes s gir who s more than 1500 times bigger than you. It's f****** epic.
I hope to see more stories from you !!
Author's Response: more is on the way, but I'm curious ... should the giantess rather be aware or unaware of the tiny?
[Report This]Date: June 30 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
This must be one of the best well writen crush stories of the decade you sir are amazing and the end was the best part loved reading every word
[Report This]Date: June 29 2013 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great Concept and Pretty good writting! Im not too much into gore and torture but the girls were pretty sexy and the descriptions made it cool even for me. The ending was kind of depressing though...Good job overall, this is an excellent story!