Date: July 19 2013 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 3: Just a fetish
Liking it so far, looking forward to things picking up but I hope not too much, I'd like for Carol to take control but still be nice at times cause she doesn't strike me as being all mean.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2013 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 3: Just a fetish
Carol is quite possibly the coolest girl in the world. Great chapter
aaron
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks Aaron, she is really cool
[Report This]Date: July 19 2013 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 3: Just a fetish
His parents are fucking assholes. I love Carol and the voice she speaks in, she sounds kind of like one of the bro's but still sexy and feminine. And the way she conforted him after what he did was awesome, she's a really likable character. PROPS.
Author's Response:
Dude thank you, I was hoping someone would notice how chill Carol was when Micro lashed out his fetish upon her feet. For once I wanted to write about a down to earth girl who didn't want to kill or use him for sex
[Report This]Date: July 19 2013 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 3: Just a fetish
Good, I wonder how far she will go and if Micro will like it. I hope carol gets some wicked ideas and that Micro hates them.
Author's Response:
Not for some time I'm afraid, she's going to be seeing him as a person for quite a while before he becomes a toy. I'm being patient