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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Not bad. But, you need to a LOT of re-editing. For spelling errors, and better separation of dialogue from narrative.

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