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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2013 11:29 AM Title: A New Day

This chapter was great I can't wait to see what happens next. I love your descriptions of things as well as the pace, flow if this story. Great job.

aaron
PS. Will there be more barefoot scenes, with painted toes?

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your great review, Aaron. Glad to see that you're enjoying it thus far. =)

Absolutely! I wouldn't be able to say for sure when they might come about, but there is definitely more on the way. After all, what's a good GTS story without barefoot scenes? 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2013 9:57 AM Title: A New Day

This has to be the most laxed security force for a major cover-up I've ever seen.

Author's Response:

Lmao. It isn't a 'major cover-up' though. >.>'

I want to say what the true nature of the group is, but, that would kind of blow the whole thing. All shall be revealed as the story continues and it will begin to make more sense. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2013 8:34 AM Title: A New Day

Don't think of it as "slow." Think of it as "delightfully prolonging the suspense."

I know I do. :-)

Author's Response:

Haha. =) Certainly a good way to put it.

Thanks for your great reviews as always, Carycomic! 

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