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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 1:41 AM Title: Prologue

I love this story! Seeing the progression between Rachel and Chris is like night and day...quite honestly I can't really blame Rachel for being an evil, selfish girl. This kind of character progression and sheer contrast between characters in the same story is not something I find too often on this site, you've really done a good job with this one so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words!

Reviewer: kringles31 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 6:14 PM Title: Prologue

death by giant baby, that I would like to see more of.



Author's Response:

Alright, I can dig it :)

Reviewer: Crocodile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 10:13 PM Title: Prologue

Very cool beginning with a lot of Gulliver like potential.

I hope to see more as soon as possible!!!!!

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