[Report This]Date: January 12 2020 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Great story! I sort by recently added, so I am very lucky and happy that I caught this. I’m very glad you decided to return to this story. I am a fairly long time lurker, so sorry if this is not the most helpful review. Would love to see more intimate moments between Terra and Icarus, especially at a reduced size like he was earlier in the story. Overall it’s great and I like the pacing. I really hope you decide to continue updating the story. Cheers! :D
Date: May 08 2018 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Saw this come up on the front page and realised I kind of missed this one. Hope you'll go back to it one day.
Date: August 27 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Wish I found this story earlier, I love the how the sexual intercourse between Icarus and terra doesn't dominate 95% of the story, can't wait to c what happens next, keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response: Really glad that you are enjoying it. If you want to learn a bit more about some history in this universe then take a glance at my other story The Exia Chronicles.
Date: June 19 2016 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
nice update!
Date: April 11 2016 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Oh now we have dwarves? I like the direction this is going, especially since we're going to learn more about Terra; the dwarves seem to know her.
Date: April 09 2016 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
yes! thanks for the update and love the series!
Date: September 19 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
That's OK. It's not a situation I can't live with... I have been known to make a few errors myself, usually spelling mistakes. Even a professional can't be perfect (as far as I know!) Keep on doing the good work. I love your stories, especially since I don't seem to be able to write creative work myself anymore. (I did a few dozen years ago, but my first 30 years of marriage cured me of that.)
Cheers.
Date: September 19 2015 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Thanks for the reassurances, and I'll be looking forward to the succeeding chapters.
Because I was a technical writer in my pre-retirement life, I cannot help but notice when you make grammatical errors, so I'll be making notes about them (when I remember -- I get so involved with the stories that I sometimes forget to mention them) when I remember. Occasional mispellings I ignore, unless I see them repeatedly recurring. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I do know the difference between there, their, and they're. The reason it might get messed up is because I type fairly fast, I just do a quick read to make sure it comes up right, and the computer auto corrects if you type it wrong. I change them when I catch them when I catch them but a few get by me.
Date: September 18 2015 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
You have a good start, and I'm interested to see where this goes. Mostly, your spelling and grammar appear to be in order. The girl seems to be interesting, and the bad guys are definitely nasty. So, what's the hold-up?
Keep up the good work.
Date: April 09 2015 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
You have to continiue this, it is just such an awesome story. I'm okay if you don't continiue "Connected Fates" but you just HAVE to finish this story!
Date: April 03 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Oh Terra you naughty little girl!
Date: January 09 2015 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Terra should find a way to get Mega Terra back, it was fun to have her around.
Author's Response: I laughed so hard when you said Mega Terra. She might come back later at some point, that or we'll get Giga Terra.
Date: January 03 2015 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Wow what a great story!! Love the characters!! Can't wait for more updates!
Date: December 31 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Chapter seemed good enough as is.
Date: November 11 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
So. Hows it going?
Date: November 02 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
On second thought i think my suggestion is good enough already.
[Report This]Date: October 31 2014 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Mind if I send you a few changes to my suggestion that i recently thought of?
Author's Response: No prob
Date: October 30 2014 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Really hoping Icarus' plan works, Terra's sister will be nearly impossible to defeat.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2014 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Ok. Cant wait >:)
[Report This]Date: October 11 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Hows the next chapter doin?
Author's Response: Finished just got to type it up and transfer it to my phone. I decided to put a chapter in between now and the fight but It was really long so I split it into two parts. Should be out by tomorrow.