Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident

I hope Icarus has a plan to help Terra take down her older sister who is like 3 times her height. Or else it'll just fall flat on her face.

Reviewer: licksquid Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident

Loved the latest chapter as a break from the action. Can't wait for the actual story to continue :)

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2014 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident

Terra's mom will probably make Terra feel small, half giant should make her....half size?

Author's Response: Maybe O.o

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2014 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident

He shrunk? Must be from using too much power!

Reviewer: combine44 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 08 2014 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident

Great story but you shouldn't use italics for everything, either just use it for Icarus and Terra's thoughts or not at all. Makes the story painful to read, I had to copy the text into word and un italicise everything lol.

Author's Response: The only thing that is in italics is Icarus' "voice". Also I won't be able to edit this so that its easier to read. :(

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident

 Icarus can heal? Interesting stuff there but I suppose being half elf would give him some flair for magic. Good thing too because he saved Terra from the poison which proved to be more potent than she had expected it although judging from the man's reaction to her still being alive means that her half giant side saved her from dying immediately. 

Author's Response: If you didn't catch it, he manipulated an item(splitting the knife at its base), moved an object(dirt around the man's feet), and healed both the wounds and the poison.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident

 Okay, maybe you could be a bit more specific with how you are doing the story as in do you upload a file or is it copy and paste and is it on Microsoft Word, Open Office or Notepad for example.

 I use Open Office, have the world italised in the document itself then copy and paste, it appears to keep the font used. Only difficulty I have now is showing a different language by showing a different font, doesn't translate on to this website.

 

@Critic_al , I think you are being a little harsh here. 

Perhaps you could expand on those points at the very least so that the author can improve on what you said; if there is a need for improvement. 

Reviewer: Strongkobayashi85 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2014 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident

Man I hope you dont stop now^^ Woudl be a damn shamew if Terra and her little friend Icarus wouldnt continue their journey. Now that they are together.:)

 

 

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and hopefully your story of "In the Woods" comes out with another chapter soon.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident

I sense a reference to the Dwemer but okay, I can accept it. I hope Icarus speaks soon but how can anyone know that he is in love with Terra if he has not said a word? I am curious and hope he speaks more to Terra or their relationship will not grow much unless Terra likes silent types.

  I do want to know what happened to the elves and if Icarus is the last of the elves , keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Don't know what the Dwemer is, but this story is heavily influenced by ancient greece and rome. We'll learn what happened to the elves in around 4-5 chapters if someone hasn't already figured it out. To the question about how Atticus knew is because he is very "intuned" with those around him. Terra knew because he peeked a few times, cried when he had to leave, and worked himself ragged.

Reviewer: Animike Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2013 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident

i really can not wait to see where this goes, keep it up please