Date: September 18 2015 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 2 The meeting
Interest continues. Hopefully, this little half-elf is able to accomplish something useful.
Date: November 02 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 2 The meeting
Hey Lance sorry about the late review, I got a bit carried away with my writing.
anyways its always good to see a story that goes day-by-day, in my opinion it keeps the pacing constant.
I also can appreciate the fantasy world you have created. It's unique enough to stand on its own, yet also easy to jump into thanks to your use of classic aspects of the fantasy genre.
Your main character is also unique seeing as she is merely 10ft tall. this is unusual since most stories on this website have giantesses well over 100ft. Its a good change in my opinion.
Good work Lancelot and keep on writing.
Date: October 27 2013 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 2 The meeting
This story is great. And I'm eagerly awaiting more.
Author's Response: Sorry for using your post aaron. To randomwierdness, I completely misread your question. You're answer is close, but the thing is a symbol of some sort.
Date: October 27 2013 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 2 The meeting
Seems good so far, just have to wait on more so I can give a better review.
Date: October 26 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 2 The meeting
I'm really loving it so far. n.n
This is exacly the kind of story I've been looking for so long.
Date: October 26 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 2 The meeting
Great start!