Reviews For Terra
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Tigernach Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 3 Sacrifices

Curiouser & curiouser! Is there a bit of sexual interest developing on either side?

Reviewer: randomwierdness Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2013 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 3 Sacrifices

No, I meant this

"What caught her attention something about the size of a regular human palm on the right side of his back" I think he was either abused recently, or burned



Author's Response: Again I completely miss read your post, but I answered it in the reply right below yours. Your theory of Icarus being burned is extremely close to what it really is. I've hinted at it several times, but an actual answer will be posted next chapter.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 3 Sacrifices

Yes, I actually did read Randall and Ashley in about one sitting and this chapter is a good addition even if nothing major happens. I want to see whaf adventures Terra and the elf boy get into.

Reviewer: randomwierdness Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 3 Sacrifices

He was burned?



Author's Response: Cutting wood with an ax for three days straight will leave blisters on your hands.

You must login (register) to review.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.