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Reviewer: Tigernach Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 34

I guess I finally caught up to what's been completed! You have me wondering what purpose Nyarl is going to serve. Well done! I look forward to new chapters as they come out.

With regard to your English forms: their = belonging to them

                                                   there = where?

                                                   they're = contraction for they are

You do have a tendancy to misuse them, as well as a couple of other hominym forms.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2015 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 34

I kind of like the dynamics between the two, Icarus and Terra. Their physical relationship so far feels very real and easy to love. 

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2015 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 34

Guess who's back!!!

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