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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 3: An Amirer of HUGE Proportions

Wow, this is unexpected twist. However much I like twist, I don't think it's at all believable. There don't know each other after all. Maybe after a while she develops romantic feelings for him, but not straight away.



Author's Response: Yeah. Kinda the reason why for the chapter's ahead, there will be some sort of bonding...

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 3: An Amirer of HUGE Proportions

This story is really good so far. I like the adventure and the story not focus on a certain tag or genre.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

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