Reviewer: edgehead123 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2015 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 7 The space between her toes

Such a cute story

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 7 The space between her toes

You're building some good steam on this story.  The set-up seemed a bit rushed to me, what with Georgia seeming to get over her new position in life pretty quickly, but these last couple chapters have been pretty great.  You don't see many stories that handle the gentle giantess angle like this, and the relationship of the characters comes off as much more playful than risky, which is a nice tone to have.  The newest chapter's truth or dare game in particular was very creative in its uses of their different sizes, and contained some pretty enticing situations without it seeming off on the part of either character, due to their intoxication.  If I could make one critique, I'd say don't be afraid to show us a bit more of Georgia's emotional side; as I said, she seems to have gotten over her permanently shrunken situation pretty quickly, so it might be interesting to see how she's really handling all this.  Well done, keep it up.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the advice. Usually when I start writing I have a specific scene in mind and then I have to backtrack on myself to build up to that part.  So I probably do rush through a bit just because I want to be writing a different part. I'll try and work on that though, but I'm glad you liked it.