Reviews For A daycare story
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Reviewer: Naoru Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2013 1:13 PM Title: Daycare shrinkage

Oh my god. You just made my day. I honestly never thinked that anyone was going to make the challenge, and its even better than its you. I love tales of a shrinking sister, so, its just perfect.

So far I love it. It do feels s little rushed, but its really good. The little toddlers are adorable, and I love the descriptions you make, and your writing style. I have no complains, please go on. Im loving it. And as a little side note, im a she not a he xD



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoy my story. I haven't been writing in a little while so I decided to kill two birds with one stone by writing my first challenge while simultaneously sharpening my pen. I'm also happy to here that you have enjoyed previous stories of mine, so thankyou. Sorry for miswriting your gender, it has been corrected. Don't forget, if you want anything to happen in this story then just ask me. It is your sory after all =) 

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