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Reviewer: Dwex Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story is amazing you should continue it

Reviewer: Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2014 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Come for the hot foot content, stay for the waifus~

Reviewer: Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh wow... I admit I had my doubts as to how you were going to pull it off this chapter, but they were wholly unjustified as you managed to tell both a fascinating tale and write some of the hottest foot content on this site. Easy to see why you're one of my favorite authors, and look forward to reading more! <3



Author's Response:

I'm glad you feel that way. I'm not quite sure I pulled it off myself (I probably rushed it), but anyway the hot foot content is what most people came for in the first place, right? 

Reviewer: blackairow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2014 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 5

One curriou question. In the begining of this chapter Julie says “Sushi? You didn’t get me any, did you? Because you know I that stuff.” It would seem a word is missing which would indicate that she loves or hates sushi. I'm curriou what that word is. Again loving this story, sucks that it's already ending and that I'm showing up to the party so late lol. 



Author's Response:

Good question. The fact that I left the word completely out tells me that I was probably contemplating the same thing, and that I eventually got distracted and didn't actually specify whether the word would be "love" or "hate." Therefore, I defer to the reader. Put in there whatever you like!

Thanks for the review; glad you like the story!

Reviewer: blackairow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2014 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 13

I don't know why I didn't read this story sooner. Can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Orpheus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 13

Sobstory to smut it less than thirty seconds. Must be a new record. 10/10 It was alright. 



Author's Response: What? Isn't a sob story the essential ingredient of great foreplay? =P

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 13

It's nice to see reconciliation. I've never been a fan of the "cruel for no reason" or "drunk on power" concepts that float around. "Drunk on power" is just lazy writing, IMO.

That's why I'm glad to see this kind of character development.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Jimbob. While I was actively trying to avoid it in this case, I'm definitely guilty of using the "drunk on power" trope that runs rampant in our fetish. Sure you could argue that it's lazy writing, but, y'know, it's sexy as hell! (And kind of the whole point, haha.)

In any case, I'm glad you appreciated the character development. I wasn't sure if I was too heavy-handed with it (or maybe not heavy-handed enough), but certainly the process of trying to think things through helped me improve as a writer overall. With the finish line in sight, I also think that this might be one of the few stories I've ever actually saw to the finish, so I'm happy about that as well. Thanks for feedback, and also for sticking with me!

Reviewer: Jessica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

Whoa, I didn't see that coming~ I'm quite curious to see where it goes from here.



Author's Response:

I was definitely trying to surprise some people with this one. Nothing like a good plot twist!

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

That would certainly explain why she's been abusing him. She was desperately looking for some way to regain control in her life, and this miniature man just kind of falls into her lap, helpless and at her mercy. She controls him by taking out her frustration and anger on him, and in a way she's giving control of her own life back to herself. Only now does she start to realize what she's been doing, and what she nearly lost by doing it.



Author's Response:

That's pretty much it; I just hope that it's believable. 

Reviewer: ZeR0x Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Quite possibly my favorite story in the past couple of years. I'm glad you didn't make Julie so 1-dimensional as well.

Write on! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, ZeR0x. As for Julie... let's just say that she might have a few more surprises in store for us.

Reviewer: Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Mmmm, and the plot thickens~ As far as fetish content goes, this chapter was top notch - wonderful use of adjectives, good balance of Chuxi's perspective and the surroundings, and the delicious feet that I always love.

As for the plot, I'm rather curious to see more about the budding personality of Julie - the fact that she might not be such a simple antagonist sounds quite interesting, and I'm curious to see how their little conversation goes~



Author's Response:

Always nice to know that I'm not alone in my deviant appreciation for the female foot. I have a few ideas about Julie that will hopefully be revealed next weekend. Stay tuned!

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 11

Can't stand Julie, hate her so much.
Nice chapter, I had to reread to story to know what was going on. And find how much I hate Julie.

Author's Response:

Julie's a total bitch. My dream girl.

Haha.

Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 11

Love the new chapter! An ominous place to leave it, in a great way.



Author's Response:

Glad you like it, Binary_Prophet. Hopefully a few more surprises in store!

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I will give him this: He was smart enough to not just wander over to her room to talk to her. Most stories the main character is just an idiot with wanderlust.

"Stay here where you're safe."

"I'M GONNA WANDER OFF LOL! OH NO I'VE BEEN CAPTURED!"



Author's Response:

I decided early on that Chuxi would have an IQ two standard deviations above the mean. That doesn't mean that he can't be an idiot though!

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 11

I'm hesitant to feel sympathy for her. She's been putting him through some horrible experiences.



Author's Response:

I definitely agree with you there, but Chuxi seems to be more magnanimous than you or I! Then again, I would probably relish the opportunity to switch places with our little protagonist (pervert that I am).

You also should write a story so that I can review it haha. (Looks like my offer isn't much of an incentive if nobody reviewing has their own stories; maybe authors on this site tend not to review others' work?)

Reviewer: Orpheus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 11

Oh man, you better not leave us hanging for months again with a cliffhanger like this! I gotta say this turn of events are not what I expected,  but the incoming exchange of words between them fills me with anticipation.  This has got to be one of my favorites. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Orpheus! I think next weekend I'll have some time to put together the next chapter. I know pretty much exactly where it's going -- just need to get it down on paper, so to speak.

You should also write a story so that I can review it.

Reviewer: Hybrid Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 11

I eagerly await new chapters from this story whenever I check this website.  Characters are wonderful and the writing is excellent.  I was sure I knew where this story would go after the last chapter, but the latest installment proved me wrong.   Right to the situation, and then didn't have it last too long, ending with a surprising cliffhanger.  I didn't think the story would go the direction it seems to be going with Julie.  I hope this story keeps going.

One thing, I do wonder if you could enlighten as to what size Chuxi is.  I can't seem to figure that out, unless I missed a detail somewhere.



Author's Response:

I barely mentioned it early on, and have sort of glossed it over since, but Chuxi is roughly four inches tall -- probably a little less than that, actually.

As for the main action of the story, I realized while writing the chapter that there's no way Haley would allow Julie to get too far with her antics. As for where it's going... well... you'll just have to wait and see!

Anyway, thanks for the review! You should write a story so that I can review it.

Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 10

Really love it so far. Haley and Julie play so well off each other, especially with how Julie's taken a turn. Can't wait to see what happens during this game of truth and dare. Really fine foot worship in this. I'm loving your descriptions there.



Author's Response:

My foot scenes are directly inspired by the great jacksmith and the one and only Steph. If they're half as sexy as their work, I'm happy. I don't know when I'll have time to write the next chapter, but I'm hoping to make it a doozy!

Reviewer: keithy159 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 9

I love this story. I cant wait too see how Julie trys talk her way out of this.

Author's Response:

Glad you like it. I think we're just a few more chapters from the ending. Hopefully we'll get to find out what Julie's deal really is.

Reviewer: okabeR Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very happy to see this is still being worked on. Im really enjoying it and hope to see more.



Author's Response:

I'm hoping to get something up by the end of the weekend -- expect some action!

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