Date: November 09 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is amazing you should continue it
[Report This]Date: September 13 2014 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Come for the hot foot content, stay for the waifus~
Date: August 25 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Quite possibly my favorite story in the past couple of years. I'm glad you didn't make Julie so 1-dimensional as well.
Write on!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, ZeR0x. As for Julie... let's just say that she might have a few more surprises in store for us.
[Report This]Date: August 24 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Mmmm, and the plot thickens~ As far as fetish content goes, this chapter was top notch - wonderful use of adjectives, good balance of Chuxi's perspective and the surroundings, and the delicious feet that I always love.
As for the plot, I'm rather curious to see more about the budding personality of Julie - the fact that she might not be such a simple antagonist sounds quite interesting, and I'm curious to see how their little conversation goes~
Author's Response:
Always nice to know that I'm not alone in my deviant appreciation for the female foot. I have a few ideas about Julie that will hopefully be revealed next weekend. Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: August 24 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I will give him this: He was smart enough to not just wander over to her room to talk to her. Most stories the main character is just an idiot with wanderlust.
"Stay here where you're safe."
"I'M GONNA WANDER OFF LOL! OH NO I'VE BEEN CAPTURED!"
Author's Response:
I decided early on that Chuxi would have an IQ two standard deviations above the mean. That doesn't mean that he can't be an idiot though!
Date: June 03 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very happy to see this is still being worked on. Im really enjoying it and hope to see more.
Author's Response:
I'm hoping to get something up by the end of the weekend -- expect some action!
[Report This]Date: January 06 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very much enjoying this. Keep up the good work and you could have a bona fide classic on your hands.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, NFalc. I doubt that this will be a "classic," but I do think it's some of my best writing, at least plot-and-character-wise. I attribute it to the fact that I've been thinking about this story for months -- I just never actually wrote it because I wanted to finish "Perfect Dimension." I just hope I can actually close this one out. Anyway, thanks again for the review.
[Report This]Date: December 30 2013 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
So far, it's fine, but if I may be so bold, I'd suggest editing your author's note. There's nothing wrong with trying to write realistic characters -- indeed, I applaud the effort -- but there are several active stories right now that feature realistic characters and scenarios. The authors note distracts from the story, which should rise or fall on its own merits, and which so far is good.
Just my $0.02.
Author's Response:
Point taken. Thinking back, I vaguely remember being told that author's notes in general are no-nos, and that the reader's experience should be untampered with at all costs.
Anyway, I'm definitely aware of some of the stories you reference. In fact, your stories in particular (among others) inspired me to write more realistic encounters. I guess I just wanted to remark on the preponderance of fantastical characters/settings (of which I'm certainly guilty), and how I'd like to try my hand at imagining a more life-like shrunken scenario.
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: December 29 2013 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very good start so far. I loved the first chapter and the second chapter seems to be setting up well for the rest of the story.
Good luck with trying to make a girl want a footslave as realistic as possible. It shouldnt be too hard since your the one writing the story and there A Lot of girls out there who would want one, but would never admit it
Author's Response:
A lot of girls out there want a footslave? I'd like to believe that, but I'm not so sure. In any case, it's a moot point because I'd never scrounge up the wherewithal to broach the subject. =D
Thanks for the review!