Reviews For Sushi in America
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Reviewer: blackairow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2014 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 5

One curriou question. In the begining of this chapter Julie says “Sushi? You didn’t get me any, did you? Because you know I that stuff.” It would seem a word is missing which would indicate that she loves or hates sushi. I'm curriou what that word is. Again loving this story, sucks that it's already ending and that I'm showing up to the party so late lol. 



Author's Response:

Good question. The fact that I left the word completely out tells me that I was probably contemplating the same thing, and that I eventually got distracted and didn't actually specify whether the word would be "love" or "hate." Therefore, I defer to the reader. Put in there whatever you like!

Thanks for the review; glad you like the story!

Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 5

I like how you wrote her subtle hints she's giving. a nice touch of realism.



Author's Response:

Haley might be my favorite character that I've ever written.

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