[Report This]Date: September 03 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh wow... I admit I had my doubts as to how you were going to pull it off this chapter, but they were wholly unjustified as you managed to tell both a fascinating tale and write some of the hottest foot content on this site. Easy to see why you're one of my favorite authors, and look forward to reading more! <3
Author's Response:
I'm glad you feel that way. I'm not quite sure I pulled it off myself (I probably rushed it), but anyway the hot foot content is what most people came for in the first place, right?
[Report This]Date: September 03 2014 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 13
I don't know why I didn't read this story sooner. Can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: September 02 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 13
Sobstory to smut it less than thirty seconds. Must be a new record. 10/10 It was alright.
Author's Response: What? Isn't a sob story the essential ingredient of great foreplay? =P
[Report This]Date: September 01 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
It's nice to see reconciliation. I've never been a fan of the "cruel for no reason" or "drunk on power" concepts that float around. "Drunk on power" is just lazy writing, IMO.
That's why I'm glad to see this kind of character development.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, Jimbob. While I was actively trying to avoid it in this case, I'm definitely guilty of using the "drunk on power" trope that runs rampant in our fetish. Sure you could argue that it's lazy writing, but, y'know, it's sexy as hell! (And kind of the whole point, haha.)
In any case, I'm glad you appreciated the character development. I wasn't sure if I was too heavy-handed with it (or maybe not heavy-handed enough), but certainly the process of trying to think things through helped me improve as a writer overall. With the finish line in sight, I also think that this might be one of the few stories I've ever actually saw to the finish, so I'm happy about that as well. Thanks for feedback, and also for sticking with me!