Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 7: THE MOON ON SCRABBLE HILL

I've said it before, I say it, again.
I rarely score a chapter less than ten.

So, on that note, I leave this review,
Till I can follow up chapter 22
With yet more retro-military stuff
(Which I sincerely hope is not regarded as pure fluff).

Author's Response:

Whichever story gives you fun

To write, I'll catch it on page one.