Reviews For The Sin of Pride
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Reviewer: hiimpaul81 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2019 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good story needs Continuation

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Also if you could do more endings for "a new role within the family" preferably one for skylar and her amazing ass that would be awesome!!!! Where she keeps him to herself lol just a thought

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter!!! I hope the other chapter is up tomorrow!! Lol it probably won't come that soon though. Also I'm a BIG fan of butt action in these stories.... I can't wait to include the other people! Lots of butt makes every thing better! I love this story and I hope you keep the chapters long and keep them coming :) thank you for this story!!!

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

YESSSS!! Glad there was another chapter!! Hope this wasn't the last one I love this story!! Hope you get to update regularly now!!!

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

 What? Your gf dumped you because of this? Well that was harsh

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2014 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was an amazing chapter! Keep them coming! ... Your story telling was missed on here.. I hope that you will get to update regularly now. Keep it up!!

Reviewer: JZero Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome chapter! Keep them coming and keep them long!!! MORE!!! Favorite story.....please don't stop this story!!!

Reviewer: 101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope an update for this story will come soon.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm READY for the next chapter of this story!! It has me on the edge of my seat!!! I need more... Lol

Reviewer: Gtsboy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sucks about what happened to you man, hope everythings all good. As for the story, I'd love to see A New Role Within The Family completed, and especially a part about Brooke :)

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looks really really great and promising, with the tags Vore, Toilet, Unaware, Insertion, Butt, Humiliation and the right size of 1/8", all my favorites :x I really hope youll finish this story to the end.

Reviewer: shrinkchicken Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Now that's what I'm talking 'bout! Good chapter, and I'm looking forward to more. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yes the story keeps getting better!! I've been waiting for a story like this for a long time!!! This is pure perfection! Can't wait for some butt action. Btw is it possible to put up the 3rd chapter tonight? And the 2nd one didn't seem as long. I hope this story gets 60 chapters lol... 1 can only hope.

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2014 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey man, I was actually pretty worried about you. I'm terribly sorry to hear about what happened. That's a fear I have and is why I'm so careful about my fetishes. I'm glad you're doing better and are back. I for one would truly love to see you rewrite an ending to A New Role in the Family with the mother using her feet to end Jake's life. I think it would be awesome.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2014 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi there. First of all I'm really sorry to hear about what happened. Sounds like you had a terrible stretch of bad luck. All I can say is don't let it get you down - you never know what's waiting in the future!

As for the story, you've set up well with that chapter and I look forward to seeing more. Your previous story was one of my favourites (as I recall I made an account to say so, and ended up writing a story of my own as a result. I have to to thank for the exciting experience that has turned out to be (I am still writing, just been on hiatus)) and if you ever feel like writing more for it I'm sure many people would be hugely appreciative. It is however, your choice. White what you wish to write, such is the fun of authoring. Do your best, and know that I will be looking forward to any and all updates. ^^

All the best - tokubetsu

Reviewer: tinyonej Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start cant wait to read more 

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ok I think this story has great potential and I really want this story to last a long time... I'm sorry for what you went through with your girlfriend! And I think that you should keep this story going and if you want the alternate endings for your previous story.. I say write them! Cause I wanted to see the endings but I really want this story to continue .... But it's all up to you bro

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