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Reviewer: zhengguoguangxi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2016 3:39 PM Title: The Failed Sail

it is one year and 2 months already, you still not update

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2015 5:54 AM Title: The Failed Sail

Hope to see more, that was a nice little chapter that showed Izzy's lonelier past. 

Reviewer: Tigernach Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2015 6:34 AM Title: The Failed Sail

Thanks

Reviewer: zhengguoguangxi Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2015 1:56 AM Title: The Failed Sail

i love this story so much i hope u can continue it. i wAnt to see more about Izzy and natalie. u can start a part II

Reviewer: ripjaw Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2015 6:47 PM Title: The Failed Sail

I love this story. My favorite characters so far are Natalie, Izzy, and the Captain. Just a theory, maybe the island is in an alternate dimension which can only be enter through a portal in the Pacific Ocean, and somehow the portal affects the body of female teens and caused them to grow, with Izzy being the largest maybe for now. I hope you can finish the story,  and if you want you could make a sequel that takes place in a different location, though I would love to see a spinoff focusing on Izzy, maybe she could be a sort of heroic figure once she goes back to civilization. 

Reviewer: Moonpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2014 12:09 PM Title: The Failed Sail

Love the story so far hope you don't abandon it.



Author's Response:

Don't feel like writing at all.. maybe someday. :) 

Reviewer: knightslovegts Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2014 6:48 PM Title: The Failed Sail

I really really love the plot of this story. I wouldn't add in many characters. But I do have some suggestions. After her first hunt (if you choose not to describe the hunt), at least give a few more hints as to how the raptors spine was broken. Also the gruesomeness you add the later chapters makes the story head in the absolutely right direction, keep that up! I really like the specific interactions with Natalie and her surroundings such as her "regaining her sense of power." It would be sweet to see more of her thoughts as realizes her power. I love the cliffhangers as well. For this last chapter the story as I said is heading in a great direction. I'm really interested to see how Aren likes round two. If you want any personal help or more input from me please do not hesitate to ask. I am in love with this story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: nap25 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 22 2014 8:54 AM Title: The Failed Sail

I'm loving your story so far. I'd love to see Izzy run into Aren while the two girls are out. Maybe you could have them return and confront Izzy right after she swallows Aren.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2014 11:41 AM Title: The Failed Sail

WOW, its crazy that this old guy (the captain) has survived on his own this whole time! Micheal may have ended up with the least powerful of the new characters but I think the old guy may be the most interesting so far. And Natalie finally comes face to face with the giantess that puts her size to shame! Really exciting setup you have in this most recent chapter, I can't wait to see what you do with it for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the great comments, hearing things like you're excited gets me wanted to write again as soon as possible.

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 8:22 PM Title: The Failed Sail

I think that letting aren get the titanic girl would prove to be pretty interesting. I also get this feeling from your writing that michael is very mentally unstable, and it would make it pretty cool if he started hallucinating things around him happening.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for the suggestions!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 6:42 PM Title: The Failed Sail

Hahaha, it made me feel good to have that little prick let down by Natalie...You know, for someone so scrawny the kid sure has a big ego and is already thinking about how to seduce the new gts no less!




Author's Response:

You sure are right, I think I'm finding myself trying to make Aren unlikable, haha

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 5:20 PM Title: The Failed Sail

Oooh, I know!  They could find a hatch deep in the jungle, and when they open it there's an old computer and a long string of numbers that needs to be entered and Natalie could fight a smoke monster.....!



Author's Response:

Bits and pieces of your idea are in use, thanks very much!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 2:55 PM Title: The Failed Sail

Well there is some sort of awkward tension since Aren let slip that he wrongly thought that Natalie was his girlfriend. I thought that Michael should have spent more time away from them and then got taken by the larger girl and Natalie must rescue him.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the suggestions!

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 2:52 PM Title: The Failed Sail

Having a great time with this series, you're doing a great job balancing the fun power dynamics with actual plot. 

Genuinely suspenseful ending to chapter 6.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the compliments!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 9:40 PM Title: The Failed Sail

I gotta say that I really like this story so far. It's interesting to have the typical survival story with a giantess on your side...Although michael is prolly gonna end up getting his ass kicked by her...I gotta say that although Micheal is kind of an angry macho, Aren is being a little pussy smartass and a bad friend, so I can't say I blame Micheal for wanting to beat his ass.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Yah Michael is a but unlikable but it's not all his fault and so you kinda pitty him huh? It's kinda what I was going for, you wanna see him get it but too badly.

Reviewer: Story smith Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 6:54 AM Title: The Failed Sail

Somewhere aroud your three castaways age maybe a little older? 17...18 maybe? Old enough for her to be naturally stronger than Natalie

Author's Response:

That may just happen one of these days! :) I really appreciate your contribution!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2014 9:57 PM Title: The Failed Sail

I like this so far, just praying that Natalie does not use the two boys as her personal sex toys.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, I don't plan that at all. And thanks for the review!

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2014 7:20 PM Title: The Failed Sail

Super series, I'll definitely be reading



Author's Response:

Thanks a ton!

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 10:51 AM Title: The Failed Sail

Great start, I look forward to seeing how this goes.



Author's Response:

Thanks you!

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