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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 12:25 AM Title: Michael's Bigger Mess

That was a really good chapter. I like how you add the other giantess. Now Aren can have Natalie and Michael can have the other girl we don't know yet.

Author's Response:

Thanks, but I plan to spice things up a bit more than just that

Reviewer: Story smith Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 11:54 PM Title: Michael's Bigger Mess

Great! Couldn't have been better. Now a truely titanic women has come in. I don't have any idea how you will progress at this point though, maybe the trio will spy in this new girl and see if she might be friendly.. And maybe they might get caught...

Oh btw since you take reviews into consideration I think you might need to add that reviews give away some spoilers to the story in the summery lets people know so they don't loose the surprise when reading

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, but yah I'm kind of having hard time on deciding where to go from here :(

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 7:13 PM Title: Michael's Bigger Mess

 Well she didn't notice Michael but I am not sure if it is a good thing or bad thing yet, perhaps you should have Natalie slowly grow to the other giantess' size, something about the island makes them grow?

 

Hopefully Michael has learned his lesson and does not do this again. Oh and the two giantesses must meet, they certainly have to meet!



Author's Response:

They will in time, thanks for the review. Yah I thought about having a growth scene too.

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