Reviews For Holly the Freshman
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Reviewer: YuriGoodness Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2020 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wow, I seriously love this series! 

Poor Holly and Lindsey can't seem to catch a break! XD

But I'm also surprised with Diane having such a horrible thing happen to her. And I also seriously love her d84; So willing to digest the little ladies. If she ever wants a willing girl to go down her throat, I'm more than willing xD

Reviewer: RunemasterG Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2019 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wow, I'm so happy to see these updates! 

And I really love Diane. It's so tragic what had happened to her, and I really hope that she can become a good friend (or even more) with Lindsey and Holly. ...maybe with some supervision XD because I also love how easily she accepts eating people 

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2019 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 19

Darn, I thought Diane was starting to change. Guess not. And what the heck was with Danielle and Barbara just walking away for all that time? What's wrong with them? I swear I want to slap some of these characters sometimes.

Glad to see an update though.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2019 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 19

I like the nightmarish/thriller style writing with Holly grabbing Evie and walking around the shadows lol.

 

Nice to see an update, I hope all is well.

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2019 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 18

I love these slick gullets and churning bellies and big girls who want them filled and little girls who want to fill them.

With Evelyn in the picture, do we need the "Incest" tag?  Lilith's headspace is already there....

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2019 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 18

Freaking awesome. Great development and I can't wait to see how this all plays out.

Reviewer: Seething recidivist Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2019 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yo everytime you update I just go "so glad you're alive" lol, although not sure if Holly will be alive soon `~`. Always awesome when you post, love the way you describe the mental struggle in the one eating and the gradual dehumanization of the one eaten when the predator feels more of their fighting. Call me sick but I've always been a fan of unwilling/forced vore on the predator and it's not written about enough so I was glad to see you put that in for this chapter. Looking forward to your next chapter! Hope it won't be too long though.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2019 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 18

Well, that was unexpected. Diane has a tragic backstory. Did she start treating tiny people like food to ease her own guilt and convince herself they aren't "real people?" What did she tell her family when she got home after that beating?

Evelyn and Lillith seem like terrible people. I hope they let their resoecresp little ones out.

Reviewer: bledthorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2019 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 18

sounds like holly and the twin are about to become tit fat since her friends have no idea where she truely is and lilith getting permission to keep the twin i dont see her escaping this time

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2018 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 17

Very glad Linsey survived. That was a pretty harrowing rescue and it's good to know that Barbara is a trustworthy ally. Also nice to see that Danielle is not as heartless as she seemed (I wonder if that was in response to my earlier reviews. Nice redemption for her in any case).

And now there's a third tiny person? One with a vore fetish at that. Interesting. Her sister didn't seem too concerned. Is this a regular thing for Evie?



Author's Response: I wanted to leave it a little vague as to whether or not her sister saw the whole thing. She may not know where Evie is currently.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2018 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 17

Fantastic chapter. Super relieved that Linsey is ok, I was literally on the edge of my seat the past few chapters! Glad to know that Barbara can be undoubtedly trusted with the safety of the tiny women.

 

Cool to see two new figures added to the mix, Evie and Evelyn. I love how when Lilith choked and accidentally swallowed Evie, she was totally panicked yet Evie herself was having the time of her life LMAO. So funny and so hot. Wait till Evie finds out there's another passenger inside Lilith's gut...

 

All in all I'm excited for what comes next, and unfortunately I know how long it will be until it comes lol xD Solid work man.

Reviewer: Seething recidivist Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2018 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Jfc I just read all of it and bless you my friend it was a vore fan's dream! So glad I found this and can't wait for more of your work and vore galore. Seriously though goddamn, like the idea of vore is enticing as is but the moral debate as different preds swallow the girls when done well can make it 10x sexier and I think you nailed it pretty well

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2018 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 16

It's back! Huzzah! Very excited to see an update for this. I'm glad that Linsey survived, though she seems to be in pretty bad shape. I hope she pulls through. Also glad that Holly is no longer in Garrett's nether regions, as the male interaction stuff was not my thing (no offense to any who enjoyed it).

I still find myself hating Danielle. Her reaction isn't "You killed my friends! What's wrong with you?" Her first thought is about her tuition? Really?

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2018 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 16

Great stuff.

Reviewer: Dr McKay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2018 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter, I was worried this story would never be updated again

Reviewer: Rehgahro Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2018 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 16

Erg, somehow I didn't catch this update immediately.  Good stuff as always!  Your work is always consistently high quality.  And it's concise, too, which is something I need to work on myself, haha.  Looking forward to see what happens next!  :D

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2018 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 16

Nice chapter. Glad to see an update, especially since today is my birthday. Hope the tinies survive, and hope Holly ends up getting all the way through, but still living at the end, even if only barely. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2018 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 16

Awesome chapter. Didnt think you'd ever update this again.

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2018 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 15

Always glad to see new chapters on this story :)

Reviewer: GTSaddict Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2018 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 15

I can't wait for an update, holy crap these tiny ladies are in some serious peril, how are they gonna get out of this one!

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