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Reviewer: Thisguyhere Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2018 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 15

I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. This story is one of the main reasons I check the site.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2017 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 15

Amazing chapter. Glad you have returned... but I wish I hadn't waited almost a year for an update lol. 

I'm glad Diane feels guilt, trying to commit murder!! And as for Haley.. I nearly cried when Linsey fell into comatose...

 

Yet again another cliffhanger... I hope I don't have to wait too long for the follow up ;) 

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2017 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 15

Nice story. I wonder if Holly is going to end up in Brooklyn's vagina at the end instead of the stomach, and if Linsey is somehow still alive.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2017 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 15

Best vore story ever! Guess thats the end of Linsey, love how nonchalant Holly is about it. Only thing that would of made it better was a scene of Linsey being eaten by her.

I really wanted Holly to be eaten by Diane for good but then I guess the story would be over, lol. Now Diane feels guilty though so that cat and mouse game is probably finished. I loved how much Diane was dying to eat her. 

 

Great stuff!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2017 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 15

Glad to see this updated but to be honest, this chapter made me hate Danielle. She wouldn't be throwing up for no reason, it would be to potentially save Linsey's life. And then Hayley starts making out with her and she forgets all about Linsey? What a terrible friend!

I assume Holly is somehow inside Garret's dick? To which I say A. Ew. And B. How? She's tiny but I can't imagine something two inches long going up  someone's dick. That would be really painful.

Anyhow, happy to see this updated again. Sorry this chapter wasn't really my thing.

Reviewer: flashbat78 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2017 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

I relly hope that both Holly and Linsey get out a life get some time to heal after this.

Reviewer: Rehgahro Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2017 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Holy crap, an update to one of my favorite vore series ever.  I always hold out hope that you'll eventually get back to it :D

 

Good work as always, though!  I look forward to see what happens next!  Personally I enjoy the darker side of vore (it is vore after all) but I think it's your writing style which really draws me in the most, more so than whether or not it's dark.

Reviewer: Vgaurd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2017 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really hoping you post an update soon. This story is awesome and I can't wait to see where it goes.

Reviewer: Vgaurd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2017 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 14

Not a huge fan of the male interactions but still love where this story is going. Can't wait for another chapter. Maybe could you try and include a chapter where holly goes inside of a boob?

Reviewer: moosecowboy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2017 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 14

Unexpected but very appreciated plot twist. Keep it going!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2017 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 14

Male interaction isn't my thing so I didn't really care for that part. But Hayley's rather wicked game was quite sexy. Like Danielle, I'm going to be in suspense about whose belly poor Linsey ended up inside.

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2017 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

That was very tasty.  I never would have thought of that method of rescuing Holly, but it worked beautifully.  I almost feel sorry for Diane.

Hayley is definitely the most devious person on campus; I'm sure if she ever came across Susan's webcam channel, she'd get some nasty ideas.

Reviewer: Dr McKay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2017 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 14

Glad to see you haven't given up on this story.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2016 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 13

Always nice to see this story back. I love that Diane has managed to swallow Holly twice yet is feeling slight remorse. There could be hope for redemption still.

I also really enjoyed the other girls' teasing comments about Linsey. Very sexy.

Reviewer: Frizzlenidifizerizid Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2016 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

MOOOOOORE OMG I LUV U

Reviewer: 3l33thax0r Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2016 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 13

Made my day seeing this back in Most Recent. It was a good short chapter to kick things off again, and I loved the aspect of Holly finally foghting back and trying to actively escape. 

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2016 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 13

Simply salivating here.

Reviewer: Frizzlenidifizerizid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2016 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 12

OH MY GOD!!!! YOU'RE BACK!!!! YESSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!! Sorry, was excited. *cough* Great to have you back! Love this story, and I honestly thought it was dead. But I checked once a month for a long time just to make sure! Glad I did, because that cliffhanger in chapter 11 KILLED me! Anyways, fuck yes, you rock, can't wait to see what you have in store!

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2016 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 12

It's great to see you back, and I don't think you've missed a beat. I really liked the chapter, and as always, you leave me wanting more. Awesome job.

Reviewer: vanillaTHUNDAR Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2016 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 12

Great to see more of this story on here! I love that we finally got some finale with one of the tinies! Keep 'em coming!

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