Reviews For Holly the Freshman
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Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2016 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 12

Holy cow, this story is back!  Very curious how Holly will get out of this one. I don't envy you the task of finding ways for her to be eaten and survive over and over. But I'm glad you're working on this again. The vore themes, the size of the tinies, and the primarily female cast make this story very sexy.

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 12

Woo-hoo!  Holly's back, and she's already in a belly!  I wonder if Brooklyn or Garret are feeling peckish...

Reviewer: mullac Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2016 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 12

So hot! I really hope this isn't the last we see of Holly though...

Reviewer: Vgaurd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2016 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 12

Great story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter and I'm glad you're back at it.

Reviewer: Dr McKay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2016 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good to see you're back, this was my favourite story by far. 

Reviewer: RunemasterG Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 11

Man I love this story! Misfortune really seems to follow the tinies around.

And honestly, I'm a big fan of Diane!

Reviewer: io1908 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 10

I hope this is not the end of this astonishing story..

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

What an amazing way to return to this story. This chapter was written great, and I loved the interaction between the two tiny girls. I have been hoping for Diane to get Holly alone again, and I can't wait to see what happens there. I'll be looking forward to the next installment. Also, I just got done reading all your stuff on Eka's, and I really enjoyed all of it as well.

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 11

I was worried this story had disappeared for good I'm really glad to see it back :D Loved it as always keep up the good work.

- frankstergirl

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm sorry I was gone for so long. I'm getting ready to work on the next chapter of this and another story I'm writing over on Eka's. I don't plan on taking as long between chapters this time. Lol

Reviewer: io1908 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, the greatest story of all times is back again!! What a wonderful surprise :-)
I wish it was updated more frequently, it's just the best story here by far

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 11

SO glad this is back.  I love that Linsey is still shorter than Holly.  For someone who is getting her tuition waived, Danielle ought to be taking her guardianship much more seriously. Oh well, it's all educational, right?



Author's Response: It's good to be back. And as far as Danielle's attentiveness for the girls go, it's more of a naive blind trust in her friends. But don't worry, even though it may not be immediate, there are consequences for her and her friend's actions.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, I understand completely, your personal life should always take priority. I'll definitely be looking forward to it though, when you do have the chance to finish. Also, there's nothing wrong with making sure something is canon for a fetish story. They're just as good as any other kind of writing, no reason you can't establish canon. 

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2015 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

I just re-read this for the 10th+ time, and I still can't get enough. Both this and the Alternate Tales are great stories. I'm eagerly awaiting your next additions to both, I hope they're coming soon.



Author's Response: Thanks! Due to several things going on in my personal life, I haven't been afforded much time to dedicate to writing in a while. I do have the next chapter like, 90% done, as well as another alternate/side story. I still need to edit it though. I'll release it after this next chapter since it can fit into the canon of the story. As odd as that sounds for a fetish story. Haha

Reviewer: KageTengu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2015 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 10

hope to see alot more of this!!

Reviewer: kiranshi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 10

Hi man, i totally love this series... but i'm wondering... are you gonna update it? please it's totally rockin!!!



Author's Response: I'm going to update it. After a long absence, I'm finally back to writing. The alternate tales chapter was one I had written a while back. I'm already over halfway through with the next chapter of this story though. Stay tuned for an update in the next week or so.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love the dream sequences with Diane eating Holly, there's a real danger there where as Susan doesn't want to digest Lindsey, Diane definitely wants to eat Holly. I like Holly but I can't help really wanting that to happen! 

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2014 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 10

I'm so glad to see this story back I was missing it :) poor Lindsey nearly being digested and forced out the door soon as she saves here. Although I kinda wanted to see her digested to see how Susan would tell her mum haha can't wait to see hoe she gets on with holly and Danielle

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 10

Nice to see this story back! Pretty sexy stuff though I'm really starting to dislike Susan. That was very irresponsible for her to leave Linsey in there, especially after the other times. Still, it's a fetish story so you've gotta leave her trapped in there somehow.

Looking forward to seeing Linsey, Holly, and Danielle's interactions.

Reviewer: sILENTwHISPERER Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Read later

Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm really enjoying this story. You should continue with playful vore and such. I want to see Susan swallowing many shrunken women :-)

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