Reviews For Holly the Freshman
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Reviewer: Vyatich Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2014 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 5

Amazing as usual! I cant wait to see more of Diane

Reviewer: mimiru888 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2014 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 5

Love the story so far, can't wait to see where this goes. :)

Reviewer: christiawi9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm really enjoying this story. It has good writing, well made characters so far and the scnenes that people want are always written well. Congrats!

Reviewer: amysnack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2014 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

I LOVE this story! Do you have any others posted on another site?



Author's Response: I do. I've posted other stories on Eka's portal under the same name. I'll have the next chapter for this story up in the next couple of days as well. I'm glad you're liking it so far.

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loving the story so far, it's really sexy a Nd well written :) hope to see more

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 4

Nice to get some background info on Holly. Rather harsh life. Also, Danielle makes a bit more sense now. Still very fetish-y and convenient but that's okay. I love a good vore/mouthplay story. Anxious to see what other shenanigans Holly gets into.

Reviewer: christiawi9 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love the story. Please continue.

Reviewer: omicron20 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm really enjoying this so far. Please continue! I assume based on the first chapter that Holly gets out somehow, right?

Reviewer: Sora Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm really enjoying this! I'm excited to see where this goes! I'm a big fan of F/F digestion! Keep it up! 

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

Can Holly survive extreme conditions or is she just going to die?

Reviewer: mullac Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

Already favourited, looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2014 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

The concept's very cool. A modern-day Thumbelina trying to survive college. I'm not sure about Danielle though. Would anyone really be that hungry that they start eating toy suitcases? Bugs, maybe, that at least is organic. But random plastic items?

It felt unrealistic and obviously fetish-y. But then, this is a fetish story so maybe that's okay. I was just a little distracted by it. Sorry to over-analyze. That's just my two cents.



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I plan to address Danielle's, let's say quirky, fetish-ness within the next chapter or two. Suffice to say for right now she enjoys the feeling full, and doesn't always leave things to be digested. I hope that explains it a little bit.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2014 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good start, keep it coming



Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate the review.

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