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Reviewer: wwebby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 5:08 AM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Very nice. Please keep going!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, wwebby! I My updates are sporadic, but I do update when I can :) I'll see this story to through to the end!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2015 7:29 AM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Michelle is a reminder to Madison on why she has that job, why its so important. Wonderful chapter!



Author's Response:

I've never talked much about the tinies outside of Madison and Eliot's hometown, so I thought I'd give a glimpse of what a giantess meant to a regular uninitiated tiny. Kinda makes Claire out to be like a kaiju when she romped around scouting out cities in the South, in hindsight. Heh. 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2015 9:59 PM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Of course, I plan to write an ending to the chapter I contributed, will work on it soon...

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2015 6:15 AM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Class starts next week? Hmm, you may be younger than I imagined you to be. I look forward to whatever else you've planned. I haven't forgotten about the chapter I sent you, got a couple more to write. Just need to clear the 3 stories I currently have going.



Author's Response:

There's no rush :) I'm just glad you still remember XD My schedules been real busy the past year or so, so I'm in no real hurry. Take your time!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2015 2:58 AM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Aw Eliot, you're so sweet! Loved the way he made up with Madison but that was scary from Marian although if she knew, then its just a little warning. 

Glad to see you updating. Since you'll be in the summer break soon, I hope you and can update more! I'll try to do the same but it won't be for a while .



Author's Response:

Hey Nostory :) I'm actually on break already, but class starts again next week! D: Hopefully I'll be able to write one more chapter of something before the semester starts again...

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2014 6:52 AM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Guess we know why Madison wouldn't want any contact with the South for fear what the Northern giantesses  would do to the humans with their ignorance. 

 

Nice tidbit about giantess reproduction, maybe we'll see Eliot visit one of those places where he can learn to pleasure a giantess?



Author's Response:

Maybe so, maybe so :p Sooner or later, they'd have to do it!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2014 10:27 PM Title: Day 0: An Accident

No need to thank me, you make it easy enough for me to read and review your story. 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2014 6:16 PM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Oh boy, a lot of things came tumbling out during this chapter. Eliot hurt but we got to meet Tiffany who revealed so much about the giantesses and Madison's back story. 

  I wonder how Madison is doing now  that she has put herself in a very precarious situation. 



Author's Response:

Things were bound to happen :) I actually wanted tiffany in much earlier in the story, but didn't find the right timing in the end. Madison's past was a plot point I wanted to explore back when they were in the South,  but pushed it back to this chapter.

 

We'll see what happens to Madison soon :) for now,  thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2014 7:21 PM Title: Day 0: An Accident

 Maddie and Elliot are cute together, nice intimate scene. Hadn't expected it based on what I read in the first few chapters but its a pleasant surprise. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  I felt that Eliot and Madison's interactions have been really sparse so far, so I thought I'd do more scenes with them :)  In my mind ,  Madison's a girl first before a giantess,  so I'm trying to keep their relationship one of mutual love instead of the usual master/slave worship. Fetish writing is a new thing for me, so apologies if some inconsistencies exist! 

Reviewer: MasterBlythe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2014 4:31 PM Title: Day 0: An Accident

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...  :) 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2014 3:11 PM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Well I guess the teaser in this chapter was fun, I eagerly await the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Look forward to it! :) 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2014 4:03 AM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Yeah, the Northern giantesses have a sinister purpose when it comes to this little visit. Gotta agree with the rest of the reviewers here.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I certainly have something planned for the North, but you'll see :) 

Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2014 1:37 PM Title: Day 0: An Accident

I bet the Northern Giantesses want to talk to the Southern Giantesses about importing some tinies.  I imagine that any tiny that could fled to the south, leaving the poor, sickly, and crazies (that would probably be us) behind.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, riczar!  They certainly have an agenda,  but you'll see how it unfolds :) 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2014 6:50 PM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Great story... Any more chapters soon ?

Author's Response:

Oof, sorry for the extremely late reply >_< In all honesty, I've been too enamored with Dark Souls 2, so I've been neglecting my other hobbies x.x Doesn't help that I just came down with a kidney stone too, so wiriting's not been on the top of my list for a while. With that said, I'm trying to write a new chapter, but with so many distractions, no guarantees. Sorry folks ._.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 5:24 PM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Madison was feigning anger at Elliot for "disrespecting" Claire,  good to see that it did not affect their relationship. I didn't know he never played with Madison's feet but he seems to have gotten the biggest reaction out of it . 

I am curious to see where this goes, it is not just about dating anymore.



Author's Response:

Thanks for always ready! I wrote this story mainly to test out ideas I had for a giantess society, and how both sides can live together :) The dating just happens to be a happy extra~

Reviewer: HaremScarem Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2014 8:59 PM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Great story! Definitely my favorite story of the year! Very intriguing!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2014 5:52 PM Title: Day 0: An Accident

This is a cute story.  A couple notes: at 50 ft a giantess's foot would be as big or bigger than a person but still only half the length of a standard car.  I like the ranks you have for the urban licenses.  I came up with a similar idea for a project I'm working on.

On the latest chapter, I also kind of want to know what Sylvie did to his dad.  And like Nostory, I also feel like he's being unfaithful to Madison here.  Like he lacks self control.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! I've never had any actual measurements for a giantess's foot, so I haven't really through about that! xD Thanks for clearing that up!

 

I wrote Eliot to be more accepting of extranormal circumstances, so he was really just going with the flow xD Whether he was cheating or not depends on how thick headed he is...

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2014 5:01 PM Title: Day 0: An Accident

So, giantesses are immortal? As in no death by old age and they never grow old? There must be only beautiful women then! But if they are immortal, won't there be an overpopulation of giantesses and if they have children with human males, do the normal sized male offspring get treated as second class citizens in the giantess cities since there are no male giants?



Author's Response:

I didn't elaborate, but giantesses have very low birth rates to control their own population. Whether it's biological or enforced, I might make that a plot point some time in the future :) Also, the in-universe law doesn't discriminate between tinies and giantesses, but a human in a giantess city's gonna rely on his mistress anyway, so they inadvertantly become second-class citizens at the end of the day. It's just the natural order of things, I guess?

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2014 3:31 PM Title: Day 0: An Accident

Cmon Story smith, It's pretty obvious Sylvie performed some kind of sexual favor for Elliots dad!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 6:21 AM Title: Day 0: An Accident

I think the rewrite could be combined with the original chapter, it is possible but it is entirely up to you, the rewrite has a more intimate and personal touch to it, something I like. 



Author's Response:

Aha, I really should :p I'll try once I get an opportunity to.

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