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Reviewer: acheff Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 9:17 PM Title: Day 3: Night Talk

It is fairly obvious that the author has a raging foot fetish. So keep that in mind while reading this. The story itself is well thought out if a bit quick moving and it shows that this is a world the author has thought about in great detail.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :)  It's true,  I do go for peds in this fetish,  but i hope it's not distracting you from reading! 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 5:04 PM Title: Day 3: Night Talk

I can't wait to find that out, myself!
I went right from the previous chapter to this one, without reviewing. And I do that only for _really_ riveting stories.

Reviewer: Story smith Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 11:57 PM Title: Day 3: Night Talk

That explaniation about the feet thing was very original

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 9:07 PM Title: Day 3: Night Talk

 I don't think they should sleep together just yet, it is too soon. Unless you didn't mean sex then maybe its okay although you can always have the little human get into an accident if Madison uses too much force during sex and there can some sort of fallout they have to deal with.

 

  The world they live in is interesting, giantesses and humans have been each other's masters at different points? Seems like they went to war quite often then, hopefully things have settled down. I doubt that everything is so lovey-dovey, there has to be at least one giantess or human out there who hates the other side.

 

    There are plenty of questions I want to ask but I will take it slowly. 



Author's Response:

Hrm, after reading through the latest chapter again I do feel like rewriting that last part. I wrote it at 3am myself, so I might not have been thinking straight. I'll edit when an oportunity arises.

I'll expand more on the history of the world with the pre-chapter italics, but your suggestions have been helpful in paving a road in the direction I'm going, so please keep up the ideas! 

Once again, thanks for reading!

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