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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 2:00 PM Title: Day 12: The Breakup

Oh, dear! I don't know what I dread to see in the next chapter, more. Unjust punishment...or carnal consolation?

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Whatever's going to happen, Eliot's going to have one heck of a time :)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 12:16 AM Title: Day 12: The Breakup

Great chapter. I'd been looking forward to some one on one time with Matron Marian. Liked the emotions represented in this chapter as well. And I'm liking Stephanie more and more.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! :) I'm excited to write for Marian, too. Look forward to it!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 11:52 PM Title: Day 12: The Breakup

 Wow, into the chambers of the Matron herself, Madison breaking off the relationship and missing, I really can't wait for more!

  I must add that your writing has really improved by a lot since you started this story, keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I've been out of practice when I first started, but I think I'm getting the hang of writing again :)

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 6:26 PM Title: Day 12: The Breakup

Wow, Madison was kinda harsh on herself this chapter, but not only that, she was kinda harsh on Elliot too...Just breaking up with him, no discussion, no nothing.

And of course, she doesn't see that breaking up with him is hurting him too, especially leaving him by himself in this GTS haven. She could have at least taken him back south or arranged for it. But I guess I can't blame her for not thinking things through with how emotional she is right now!

And now he's stuck with someone as intimidating as the Matron of all people! Jeez. I can't say I wouldn't be scared shitless if I were him, the Matron hasn't doens't exactly seem like the "lets be friends" type, she seems more like "you'd better do what I want right now or else" type of person.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Madison just needs some time alone for now, so Matron Marian's taking the spotlight for a bit :) We'll see if she's as rough as she is intimidating!

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