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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2015 1:00 PM Title: Stage 01 Part II

Very good set up so far. Looking forward to Ms Hayes. Will there be any other giantess? Is this a product that will be used by the public? Maybe without their knowledge.
Thanks,
Diesel

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2014 3:37 PM Title: Stage 01 Part II

nice story

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2014 5:06 PM Title: Stage 01 Part II

Some thoughts then:

They're shrinking six inches per night, then. Either it's a slow acting drug, or their food is getting spiked. At this rate, they'll be less than a foot in eight to nine days.

If Cosmolex has done this before successfully, then what are they testing now? That's probably something that'll be revealed in later chapters.

Could you add the heights and date to previous chapters? It's actually quite helpful.



Author's Response:

*Snicker* >:3 Which isn't going to be very fun for either of them, I imagine.
Oh yes, indeed! All shall be revealed in time, I am sure. Though the only thing you're off on is that they've actually shrunk 10 inches per night, which does raise a few questions. (Certainly for them at least.)

Absolutely! In fact, done and done! 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2014 3:21 PM Title: Stage 01 Part II

So is this the day after the last chapter, or has more time passed?

 



Author's Response:

Its actually meant to be directly after they return to their rooms. (As they'd been asked to do so in the last chapter.)

HOWEVER! I accidentally screwed up by adding in the wrong in-story date and heights for the characters. I had been thinking about the next chapter after the one I posted today because it was already finished. So I'm going to have to edit that. XD My apologies. 

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