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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2014 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 5: ECHO!

The plot seems to be going somewhere. The pace is about right. However, (and maybe I haven't been payign attention) I think there should be more information regarding the different sizes. This probably isn't relevant to the plot but it would be interesting.

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