Date: June 11 2016 6:40 PM Title: Treasure
Idea!!. Well not really.
Could you continue the story of Jayden (chapter 2), I thought it was the best one and was upset it was left on a cliffhanger.
Also love your work keep it up! :^)
Author's Response:
Huh, this story sure has gathered a lot of dust. I honestly hadn't considered coming back to it after a lot of time died off. I suppose though i can look into this and see what i can come up with. Thank you for taking your time to review I appreciate it :)
[Report This]Date: November 22 2014 1:14 AM Title: Treasure
I approached this story cautiously as it isn't quite my type, but I have to say it's a creative twist. You did a great job having Gardevoir express herself despite the limitations on speech.
I definitely want to comment on your fantastic character design-- Blaire, Karla, Gardevoir, Rayner, Professor Sycamore, Erika, Charizard, Charles-- Honestly I might even still be missing some, the characters were very likeable! I especially enjoyed Blaire and Karla's chapters! (Though this may be my bias preferencing more human-like imagery :] )
A few criticisms-- Erika's name suddenly changed to Karla during Ch7 and Grammar/spelling errors were present although infrequent. There was nothing so severe that I couldn't understand the idea though.
All-in-all, great work! Hope to see more in the future!
Author's Response:
Omg i miss-typed there names xD im glad you caught that i never would have. Thank you for your imput I appreciate it. Also happy you like my story and i hope to please ^,^
[Report This]Date: November 12 2014 6:22 PM Title: Treasure
Enjoyed the pokemon in control angle. Hope we see more at some point, oddly entertaining.