[Report This]Date: May 08 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 04 - Seafood
Well still in love with this story. One of the first story I read on this site.
It's nice with the slight changes to dialogue and detail. Always like this one better than "The Realm of Kendra." Just thought that Melanie and David made a better couple.
Author's Response:
I must agree with you, I personally like the David/Melanie couple better than the David/Kendra couple. I like TRoK for different reasons, mainly because it was better written and had an actual plotline, but each story is good in their own ways. They're definitely different stories if you completely disregard the characters and their interactions (and the whole gts/vore thing). This was my first story too, and I'm glad you like it as much as I do! I am having a blast editing it and pushing it out again for you guys. I hope I can enhance all the good memories ya'll might have from this grand story. ^.^
Thanks for the review!
--TFK
[Report This]Date: May 08 2014 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 04 - Seafood
It could also be the younger-than-average age of Melanie's latest morsels. Age thirteen is kind of controversial when it comes to victims of giantess vore. Sort of like the pedophile victims on L&O: SVU.
Author's Response:
Very true. I was going through the edits to this one and I wasn't sure how to proceed. I guess this particular chapter deals with the whole "Everyone is a target." Philosophy. Melanie tries to avoid it, get away from it, etc; but they force her hand. Of course, she could have just completely disregarded them and ignored them. Out of all of the story, this is probably my least favourite chapter. I know some folks are into it, and some folks are against it, I personally am neutral. I don't read my story for the same reasons as other folks. To me it's just a story and it covers a lot of different topics about society and what not. I left the last scene of this chapter in particularly to be full covering, but if I get a few more complaints or suggestions on how to make it better, I'll do so. It wouldn't be too difficult really. Just a rewrite of some dialogue.
Thanks again for the review!
--TFK