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Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 05 - Dollhouse

Really like the new chapter, but it seems you posted it twice in the same chapter?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the tip, I know I fixed it and it just went back and doubled itself again. I'm always having so many problems with this old website. It really needs a technology update in my opinion, :o Anyway, I hope it's fixed! Thanks again for letting me know, I'll try to check it occasionally because even though it's fine when I post it, it for some reason just decides to mess itself up randomly.

--TFK

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2014 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 05 - Dollhouse

Well, the extended magic must have worked. You posted the same chapter twice, in one installment!

X-D

Seriously, though: you depicted a nice game of vore tag. Thanks for sharing this story with us. And, rest assured, I'll be lurking around, waiting for your next literary contribution. :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks! I saw that yesterday and facepalmed myself pretty hard. I fixed it, I think. Not even sure how that happened. I will get to the next chapter here in a couple of days, thanks for sticking around! ^.^ Things are only going to get more interesting in the next chapters! A lot of my readers claim the next segment is their favourite. Hopefully I can improve on it even more.

--TFK

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