[Report This]Date: June 18 2014 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 08 - Going In
Well this is a blast from the past. I like some of the new interactions between the two. If they're are any, it's been a while since I read the original. I don't know what your plans are for editing, but you should try something besides vore. Though this one of the stories where vore fits.
Plus one of the first stories I started reading on this site.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I'm honoured to have been among the first for you! We all need a little nostalgia from time to time, right? There's a little bit of new content every other chapter or so, I'll try to add something a bit off topic. This story was primarily just a vore story. I guess that's just what I'm best at writing. :/ I will give it a shot and try to add some wholly new stuff! Thanks, ;)
Remember,
--HK