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Reviewer: combine45 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 01 2015 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Monstrous

Seems like Melanie is torn between her potential love for David and becoming more of a monster. I hope she decides she value's his happiness more than her desires in the end.



Author's Response:

I don't want to give away too many spoilers but I think I have dealt with the loose strands of time. What ever that theory is called where history tends to get off course from time to time, but always ends up how things are supposed to be no matter how different it tries to be, will hold true. No worries! 

Reviewer: io1908 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Monstrous

Yeah, it was a nice try to read more gts action by Melanie, you're talented anyway. But personally, I love this story because it's mainly an hymn to gts vore, the most perfect aspect of this unique fantasy.. So please, don't change that a lot :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks! I try to at least touch on everything at least once, but you're right it has one directive and I am definitely not going to change that very much at all. Thank you for your review and rest assured it won't change much at all if any! ^_^ 

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