[Report This]Date: May 02 2014 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 02 - Breakfast
Mischievous "little" minx. Isn't she?
Author's Response:
What can I say, she knows what she wants, and she gets it. Always! :O
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 01 - Day Zero
This story is extremly hot. I remember reading it long ago and will gladly give it another read. I really hope you get it posted quickly, because I could pretty much write a poem about how much I love this story.
Know that even if people often remain silent, your work matters for a lot of them and is a very nice addition in their life. Thanks a lot for sharing !
By the way, I always wanted to ask you...this Hiya! stuff Melanie keeps saying throughout the story, which is cute, is it somewhat related to "Hey ya, it's me, Imoen !" from the video game Baldur's Gate ?
Rated 3 billion stars but my comment probably tells more than the rating anyway
Author's Response:
Hey, thank you so much for the review! Your words uplift me greatly, I appreciate them. Thanks for being a long time reader, ^.^ I'll do my best to keep it at a consistent rate and not to disappoint! I'm working on something big, and doing this at a steady rate will help me get it finished! I hope you enjoy the nostalgia of the old story, but get a fresh view on the whole world with all the new content.
Sadly no, I don't actually think I know that reference. I tried to give Melanie a cute personality, I'm glad you picked up on that little detail!
Thanks for the review and the stars!
--TFK
Date: April 28 2014 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 02 - Breakfast
I always liked this story, and can tell you improved and changed quite a bit of it so far.
I'm excited to see what else you've changed in it. Can't wait to see the vehicle shrinking and the scene at the park in particular, just to see how many more details you throw in this time around!
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for the review! That scene is coming up soon, it's one of my favourites! It was my first attempt at writing something like that, and I've got some ideas on how to improve it greatly. I hope you like it!
--TFK
Date: April 28 2014 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 01 - Day Zero
Whoa...Just whoa, I'm actually sad I get to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Hmmm? New chapter out today! More to come soon I just know! ^^
--HK