Date: May 05 2023 9:01 PM Title: All's Well That Ends Well. . .Or Does It?
This was so cool and so well written.
Thank you.
I’m heading for part two. 🤗
Date: February 26 2019 3:40 PM Title: All's Well That Ends Well. . .Or Does It?
This was a really sweet read. I'm hoping certain heartbreaking aspects of it aren't real for you as the author, as I know artists tend to create based on personal experience. Beyond a few misspelled words and misused words, it was a very good read. I'm going to read the sequel.
Author's Response:
Nah, I just wanted to write a good story for my first time on the site so I added in some emotional aspects to give it more depth. The spelling mistakes couldn't be helped. Fun Fact: Each chapter was written in one sitting. Not the smartest idea, when it comes to quality, but I was just eager. Especially when others started giving good reviews.
[Report This]Date: March 27 2015 6:20 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
By the way, soldiers only salute officers not enlisted. When a soldier is talking to a NCO they got to the position of at ease.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2015 12:25 AM Title: All's Well That Ends Well. . .Or Does It?
Amazing!! Simply amazing.
My first impression when I began reading this story provided that I should expect a relatively cliche' albeit entertaining tale. However, the characters I percieved as having been set on a predictable development track completely obliterated the railing. The setting that I presumed to have been inexplicably tossed together for no other reason than to provide a convenient stage for the plot developed a history of its own almost as if it were a developing character as well.
From these excellent story elements grew some of the most deep, dynamic, mature, and even philosophical life lessons that I've seen offered in literature. Not even just once, but multiple times this story has expressed impactful gems of this quality.
It's a simple matter to give charaters a reason to be a fool and to let them stay a fool, but you've outdone yourself here. From the logical reasoning and thought processes we followed our protagonist through, to the experience, foresight, and wisdom that the adults in the story had to offer-- this story has been a fantastic reading experience. So with that, I thank you for sharing!
Author's Response:
Damn, never expected my story to have been this enjoyable. I'm extremely grateful that you liked it.
The story actually started out thrown together but I wanted to build on it more as I went along. I love development, whether plot or character, and I hate when not enough is explained, so I tried my best to cover any questions that might be raised.
Also I don't like stories where people do things for no reason. It makes a two dimensional character. I needed Amy to be more than a simple bully who gets what's coming to her. She needed to be real.
If you haven't already seen I'm currently writing a sequel to this story. I pray to God I don't fuck it up as most sequels do. But, even if you don't read it or like it, I want you to know how much your words mean to me. It literally makes me smile to read about how someone has actually enjoyed something I loved working on. Thank you.
Date: October 04 2014 10:13 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
So, any progress on the group of chapters?
Date: September 24 2014 5:28 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
So any idea when the 1st chapter will be ready?
Author's Response:
Well the thing is I want to write out a bunch of chapters before hand so I'm not posting anything with gaping plot holes.
Date: September 21 2014 8:01 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
@DarienFawkes... That's awesome to hear! And really?. Surprised you'd say that. Seems like most people loved it! If rank it up there with some of the bigger stories coming out now like downtrodden
Author's Response:
Well it was my first story so it didn't come out the same way I wanted it to. Now I've learned my lesson: type everything on a Google Docs first and save it, and never try to write one chapter everyday. That was exhausting and the quality suffered because I would rush. So I'm going to be taking a lot of time on these new chapters.
I agree with you, Downtrodden is gonna be big. Hope my sequel comes together as smoothly.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2014 11:44 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Any idea as to when the sequel for this story will be out now that your latest story is completed?
Author's Response:
I've just started working on it. I'm sorry to say it will take a while to finish. I have some awesome ideas I want to incorperate but I need time to try and piece everything out so it's not one big mess of "shit happened"
I love that you're interested to know. I didn't even think it was all that good.
Date: August 29 2014 9:51 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
That's awesome to hear!... Can't wait to read the sequel!
[Report This]Date: June 12 2014 7:18 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Still planning a sequal ?
Author's Response:
He'll yeah I am but it's gonna take a while. Right now I've just started a different story and I want to finish it before going on to something else. If you're into shrinking then check it out. Thanks for the support.
[Report This]Date: May 29 2014 10:48 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
I'm usualy more interested in shrinking stories over giantess stories, but I gotta say this story had me hooked. You do such an awesome job at creating very real and fleashed out charaters, that story preferance fall to side and you just find your self sucked into the story.
Date: May 26 2014 6:36 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
So, any idea when the sequel will be out?
Also. Any plans to have other giantesses/giants in the sequel besides Amy?
Author's Response:
The sequal won't be out for a while since I want to focus on another story idea I've had for a long time.
And nope, sorry. This story is about Amy living life as the ultimate outcast, a giantess in a world of normal sized humans. If I were to add another giantess then that takes away from the main source of conflict: everyone learning to accept Amy, Amy learning to accept herself, and Ben and Amy figuring out their feelings for each other.
Date: May 18 2014 6:42 AM Title: All's Well That Ends Well. . .Or Does It?
I have fianlly gotten around to reading this story. I loved it. You have a talent for creating characters I care about. I hope you write more giantess stories in the future.
[Report This]Date: May 17 2014 6:17 PM Title: All's Well That Ends Well. . .Or Does It?
I half expected Amy to say: "Let me take care of that." And rip the stump out of the ground before they left. Ah, well. Digging builds muscle.
Wow...Katelyn is just completely adorable. You've got the cute little sister dynamic in the bag.
And the relationship begins! But the story ends. :( Damn. I guess I'll just have to imagine the rest. Vividly imagine it, that is. Wow...that's so lame.
[Report This]Date: May 17 2014 9:01 AM Title: All's Well That Ends Well. . .Or Does It?
Actually, Superman _did_ wind up beating Thor in a fight! In the now-classic JLA vs. AVENGERS crossover mini-series from DC and Marvel (about fifteen years ago, more or less). It was a hard-won victory for Superman, true! But, a victory none-the-less.*
As to the rest of this story? What can I say? I love happy endings, in general. And, this one--where the misunderstood gentle giantess finally makes a good friend (and a potential boyfriend, at that)--was not only the happiest ending I've read about, on this website, in a long time. It is an instantly classic one! So thank you for sharing this with us...and bravo!!
*Probably because he used heat vision to make Thor drop his hammer rather than throw it.
[Report This]Date: May 17 2014 3:54 AM Title: All's Well That Ends Well. . .Or Does It?
The story's over?! Aww... I loved this story! This sucks!! This was one of the greatest stories I've read on the site. Anyway, thank you for writing this for so long. And I hope you eventually return to these characters soon. For me, it doesn't seem like their adventure is completely done yet.
Katelyn spelled "too" as "to", but she has a learning disability so I'll let it pass. That means that you finally get your full five star rating. Take care; I hope you write something new soon. You've inspired me to finish writing my own story. If I ever have the time to finish it, please check it out.
[Report This]Date: May 16 2014 11:45 PM Title: All's Well That Ends Well. . .Or Does It?
Great story!
[Report This]Date: May 16 2014 10:45 PM Title: All's Well That Ends Well. . .Or Does It?
I will admit that I am disappointed it's over, but it did have a conflict and a resolution and it was kinda sweet that the giantess kinda had to deal with more internal problems than anything else in her life.
It was truly an excellent short story. Especially for a first try. Continue writing my friend your good at it and I really want to see what you can make now that you have expirence under your belt.
Date: May 16 2014 10:45 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Also, if you want to bounce ideas around with someone, I wouldn't mind giving you a hand.
[Report This]Date: May 16 2014 10:03 PM Title: All's Well That Ends Well. . .Or Does It?
Sweet, sounds like Amy finally gets to fit in. If you do a sequel and honestly you should, I'll be first in line to read it.