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Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 9:18 PM Title: All's Well That Ends Well. . .Or Does It?

Thank you so much for the amazing story. This is for sure one of the best stories on the entire site.

Can't wait to see the sequel once you get that sorted out.

You should definitely keep writing on this site.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 9:04 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.

Awesome! I'd really love to see the character back! Amy is such a sweetie, I'm glad she got a second chance and is taking it! I'm looking forward to whatever you have planned!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2014 10:14 AM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?

Now, this is my kind of plot-twist.

Brilliant! :-D

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2014 8:39 AM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?

"Amy made him so made he forgot all fear" made me doubt my English for a few seconds... but most importantly it made me realize I still hadn't congratulated you on this story.

Especially because this story is basically the opposite of what I like - giant woman instead of tiny guys, good giantess instead of evil, and so on -, and yet I can't get enough of it :)

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2014 11:56 PM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?

Great chapter!

 

Amy is redeemed.

Reviewer: False Shepard Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2014 11:23 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.

Awesome new chapter, as usual! Loved the character development for Amy you did in this chapter, all of the random acts of kindness she did was a great addition to the story! As usual, looking forward to your next chapter

Reviewer: Story smith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2014 9:58 PM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?

Ahahaha I knew there was gonna be a connection with Ben family and the captain! That was good, that was really good

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2014 9:26 PM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?

Those people said nothing because they knew no one would believe it or they would just ostracise them. Really touching to see them and Ben stand up for Amy who might not take this as well as Ben thinks. We'll see.

Now Captain Thomilson, what will he provide to this tale? A new antagonist or somebody more heroic. Can't wait to see what happens, will Ben confess his love for Amy? Or will she break down when she finds out what happened?

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2014 9:26 PM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?

Great chapter once again.. Can't wait to see Amy's reaction, and if this story will spawn a equal.

Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2014 8:57 PM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?

Man I love this story.  The more you learn about Amy, the more you like her.  Wonder if Ben will get to break the news to her.  He's won the town over for her, let's see if he can win her over also.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2014 8:48 PM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?

Oh! What a twist!! Both of them. The town's accounts on Amy's good deeds and the army twist. How did I not see the last one? Really, IT'S TOO DAMN OBVIOUS! HOW DID I MISS THOSE!?

Did I mention how much I love this story? Cause I really, really do. It's a fairly simple story admittedly, but it's extremely great execution. I really really love everything in this story.

Except your grammar. You repeated "made to" in one sentence next to each other. 4.9 out of 5 stars. Try your luck next time...

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2014 7:50 PM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?

Well...that was beautifully done. Honestly, it felt like a scene out of a movie. The dialogue was perfect.

Hopefully Amy will be willing to stay. She seemed quite intent on leaving before, but a lot of people stood up for her. I'm sure she'll make the right choice.

Loved this chapter.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2014 7:41 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.

Aww, what a nice chapter. It's obvious that if Amy wanted to she could do a lot more good than harm. The people of the town just gave her a chance to do that, now will she take it?

I can't wait for another update!

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2014 5:04 PM Title: Wise Words From a Few Old Geezers.

At first I thought that the soldiers may have only recognized Ben's last name because they had heard rumors of his defiance towards Amy. But now, after getting a glimpse at his father, I wouldn't be surprised if it's because Daniel has a military background.

Sounds like Ben may have been trying to live up to his father's reputation for most of the story. Never backing down and doing his best to defend others.

Good stuff. It'll be interesting to see how they plan to convince the entire town to give her another chance.



Author's Response:

It seems I have perfect timing. The next chapter is out now

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2014 11:40 AM Title: Wise Words From a Few Old Geezers.

"A borad overview..."

Does this mean Ben talked to his father by imitating a fictional Russian tourist who makes worthless documentaries?

Ba-DUM-boom!

Okay; being serious, now. I love the approach you're taking with this story. Bonding with gentle giantesses is still pretty much of an exception to the usual rule of gts-storytelling (i.e., "Girl Grow! Girl Smash-and-eat!"). And your contribution to the former continues to be done exceptionally well. :-)

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2014 2:16 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.

 I have a theory about Ben's observation on why Amy's parents live in a small house with seemingly no servants. Amy's expenses are all paid by her parents and this is causing a serious drain on their finances. 

  After some years of Amy being a giantess, they had to move to a smaller house and live less like billionaires in order to avoid bankruptcy. Amy may or may not know this but if she does, it is probably making her feel worse as she may feel like a burden to her parents. 

  This means no servants as well as they cannot afford them but the furniture is because they got it when she was smaller and they just moved it over.  Am I right? 

Reviewer: False Shepard Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2014 1:22 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.

Another awesome update! This is definitely one of my must reads on the site. Really cool development you got going on now. The parents were a cool touch, and I'm glad they moved the trio into action. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 9:29 PM Title: Wise Words From a Few Old Geezers.

With great power comes gre...sorry wrong story.

 

Great stuff!

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 9:17 PM Title: Wise Words From a Few Old Geezers.

Great chapter as always :)

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 9:07 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.

Beautiful chapter, there are spelling errors but I won't pick on it. So I was right, Amy got bullied early in her growth spurt and she responded by distancing everyone, even her parents. 

 

 If Ben loves her and wants a chance with her, saving her from the town and also herself may do the trick. He is pretty much the only person left who can make everything right. Show everyone the picture since apparently no one remembers a normal sized Amy and if a victim can forgive Amy for it, maybe everyone else should.

 

  I think her parents might be afraid of her, they just don't want to say it. Not as scared as the town but there is fear. 

 

@storysmith, Daniel is right. Amy should hear it but it might lead her to accept her fate. She shouldn't, there is so much she can do but she needs to find the will to fight on. 

 I was worried when you didn't update, thought something happened. Thats how much I like this story! 

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