[Report This]Date: November 15 2014 12:56 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
Best story I've seen on this entire site. This author manages to describe the giantess's torture methods in amazing detail, which is something most other authors fail to do. I love how she drags it out and displays her total dominance. With all of this, author still manages to keep an awesome plot. This would make a really good movie.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm really glad that you think so highly of this story, I'm honored. :)
I do wonder how the average person would react to a movie with brutal scenes such as in this one though. :D
[Report This]Date: October 23 2014 10:41 AM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
This is an outstanding awesome story so far and I am glad you are kind of greedy when it comess to the gory scenes... it makes it much more interesting than going from one cruah to the next vore and so on. I would have loved some more full weight foot crush action without grinding but as I said... it´s perfect the way it is. I adore your patience because it gives you the ability to get deeper into the details of everything. Also... the story is very interesting and unique, only thing that i can´t buy so far is that change in Maia from Icequeen-Primal Beast-Evil Temptres into a purring kitten with Mathew... but I´m sure you´ll have your ideas already set. Oh, and... don´t have her kill him please... better find a way how they can be good for each other. Can´t wait for the next parts...
Author's Response:
Thank you for your generous review!
I get what you mean by going from crush to vore and so on. It's like reading a template, it get boring very fast and stories like that remain largely unmemorable.
The story still has a lot to go through. The next two or three chapters are going to be a little boring too, but as you said, I'm not rushing it and I'm keeping myself patient. But afterwards, I think you'll like it since it'll include some of what you're looking for.
And the change in Maia's attitude towards Matthew is intentional and not a simple as it seems, don't worry. Everything will become clearer as the story progresses. But how it's going to end for Matthew though, that's something you'll just have to read to find out. :)
Date: October 12 2014 8:48 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
Maia can make people grow and shrink....interesting, very interesting.
Author's Response:
And more. ;)
Date: September 11 2014 6:07 AM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
I appreciatte that a lot!! Thanks!! :D :D
Author's Response:
;)
[Report This]Date: August 26 2014 2:39 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
Very well written story so far, I'm loving her relationship with Matthew. Its what i like to call the unique gentle context. Where she has shown no compassion or mercy to anyone, but Matthew so far. One thing I would say that makes this story so good so far is that you haven't shown much of Maia's perspective. Keeping her motives and opinions of Matthew secret has done alot for making her a unique and memorable character. Also having him be a psychiatrist was a perfect choice. Keep up the good work I think this could be one of the best stories on this site, or at least one of my favorites.:)
Ps. I will be crushed if she ends up killing Matthew :(
Author's Response:
Oh hey! Thanks a lot! Sorry, but I haven't seen that you've reviewed the story. Quite busy these days.
Their relationship is why I've started this story to be honest. I wanted to train myself writing a story where it was important to show what the main character was thinking, why he was thinking that way and mix it with traits and situations that are a little bit out of the ordinary. Being a 'mind-reader' was the obvious choice for Matthew IMO and I'm glad you like it. :)
I've always intended to keep Maia's motives hidden and the general setting a little bit mysterious in the beginning, and instead focus on Matthew. But the story will be progressing a little bit into Maia's territory now and her history. I've written half of the following chapter and should be ready in the coming days/week.
Thanks again and I'm terribly sorry for the late reply!
[Report This]Date: June 23 2014 11:32 AM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
God just when I think I know the extent of her power there she goes with some sort of godly power. Spawning dead primitives to toy with? Epic. The way she killed them too was well written. It wasn't just mindless slaughter, there was thought out into it and a message given.
I've said it before and I will say it again, best story ever. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Oh there are many more scenarios similar to this one that I've planned to write about. This place she's in has quite some interesting tools to play with and torture tinies. Along that I plan to expand on her personality and past, as well as Matthew's and their relationship with each other.
And I'm glad that I've been able to get across the message as you've put it. This wasn't mindless slaughter indeed, it was a controlled expertiment just to show the ways she can manipulate tinies, how she can kill with such subtle acts.
Thanks for the review! :)
Date: June 22 2014 7:14 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
wow this is a really good story. Pleass write more!!!
Author's Response:
I certainly will, thanks! :)
[Report This]Date: May 31 2014 12:21 AM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
That was a great development chapter. So Matthew is kinda like a Dexter...Awesome!! With that kind of mentality he and the giantess could make quite a duo. This is turning into my favorite story in the violent genre. Thanks for the contribution, and I can't wait for the next part!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it so much! And I'm really excited that you could spot the similarity with Dexter. Matthew is certainly a lot like Dexter, but he's also a blend between him and a different character from another similar albeit less popular show. I guess I'll have to leave you guessing who it is as the chapters roll by! :D
Date: May 30 2014 7:54 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
So the evil duo finally pair up...Despite him having doubts you can tell hes gonna end up a willing participant.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review Gadget! It's going to be interesting for me as a writer to try and pull off such an asymetrical relationship of two 'killers', especially since both will have different urges that drive them to do so.
And I was just reading your story! Quite a lot of things to catch up to for me, will have to put in a review later!
[Report This]Date: May 19 2014 12:29 AM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
That was a deliciously twisted chapter. I was wondering if Matthew would be picked out, glad to see I wasn't disappointed! I am definitely curious as to where you will take it from here. Now that they are getting some private time, Matthew and the giantess could get to know each other :). Looking forward to it!
Author's Response:
Yep! The idea is for them to have a certain kind of relationship that you don't often see in GTS stories.
Date: May 16 2014 9:00 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
This story has me craving more! It has an excellent hook and tons of potential. I'll be on the look out for updates!
Author's Response:
I hope I can write stuff that lives up to it then! Thanks Sporadicx! :)
Date: May 14 2014 10:06 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
Psychopath meets sociopath. Not something you see very often, and I'm definitely looking forward to more of this story.
Author's Response:
But, is there a difference? ;)
I'm glad you like the idea! But i'll try to go deeper than just superficially describing them such... I hope!
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 6:52 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
Good intro. Got me pumped for what is to come.
I do hope that the killings will get more personal. Theres nothing like a cruel giantess getting to know her captives then brutally murdering them in fitting ways.
Btw. We writers meet in the Egiantess.com chatroom every sunday at 9:00PM eastern time. You should come. :D
Author's Response:
There will be both of them. Chapters with victims she's been keeping for a long time, but others where hundred namless people die for her pleasure and all that. It'll kinda be episodic after the first few chapters, each dealing with different scenarios.
My main objective in this story is to try and experiment at creating interesting characters and scenes, advance as a writer basically.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 6:47 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
"This is basically going to be torture porn" my cup-o-tea.
Author's Response:
Oh, hey, I forgot to respond on the review above to the Egiantess thing. Sorry I missed it yesterday since I only logged in today to check this, but I'll try next time, even though I'm from Europe and it means you meet at 3:00AM here.