[Report This]Date: June 23 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter Four - Stairway to...
Loved the chapter! It was a super sexy experiment—these are the kinds of chapters I like the most because they are more interesting than the typical: giant girl vs city affair. I also really liked the thoughts that Matthew was having in regards to how easily she ended lives just for a quick burst of pleasure.
Good stuff, consider me hooked!
Author's Response:
I remember you being much more into gentle stuff back when I started writing here man! I guess you couldn't resist the dark side! Violent GTS FTW :p
Date: June 23 2014 11:14 AM Title: Chapter Four - Stairway to...
I have already read 70 stories here. I can say this is the most intriguing of all, and as you, english is not my mother tongue (I'm spanish). You have my admiration, I hope someday I can write something of this level. This chapter, particularly, left me totally amazed.
Hope to see more soon!!
Author's Response:
Practice. There's no better way than that if you wish to improve your writing. Practice and reading too of course, there are some great writers here, but I mean novels in general too. If you read my first chapters of Broken Sky that I've written in the beginning of last year, you'll see the progress that I've made so far and it's certainly not hard to achieve it. You just have to write. :)
I'm glad this story is living up to its expectations!