[Report This]Date: June 30 2019 9:59 PM Title: Weather
Dog. I love this story. I'm a big fan of slow burns and of close connections, as I'm sure you could see by any of my other reviews, so this story is on the money for me so far. I love the characters and how much I feel like I know them, and I like that, as an author, you don't treat us, the readers, like we're stupid. You give us some space to ruminate and fill things in before you either confirm or deny them later - it makes it either satisfying to know we were right, or intriguing to see where we were wrong. I'd say more, but this story is still pretty new and I'm reserving further comment until I've seen a little more!
On a similar note, I love when these giantess stories (if this can be called one of those, I guess we'll see later) are bilateral - that is, I love when even the """normal""" person has something to give to the relationship, when they're both real people who have real input on each other. So thank you for scratching my itch. Please scratch it a little more!
[Report This]Date: June 30 2019 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Damn, I ran out of chapters :-(
[Report This]Date: August 09 2014 11:39 PM Title: Weather
No idea where this is going, but it definitely has me a bit hooked. Jessie definitely has something going on with her.
[Report This]Date: August 08 2014 7:28 PM Title: Weather
Heck of a delay between chapters here. I hope the future ones aren't so far off.
[Report This]Date: May 20 2014 10:35 PM Title: Weather
Cool story. I'm getting into it. Although I'm a city fella, what is a box? Is that the small stable? Also the "-" in front of dialog is a little annoying.
aaron
Author's Response:
Here is where it shows that English isn't my first language. I have a word for it in my own, but in English I've only ever heard to them refered as boxes. But yeah, the individual rooms for horses within the building referd to as stables. I'd love to get an expert opinion on this if the word box is confusing.
The constant debate of - or " to indicate speech. Back in school, all those years ago my teacher told me that " is mostly enough, but in dialogue heavy texts you can use - to indicate when different people are talking. So I use both. - " to mark the beginning of someone talking and " if the same person resumes talking or someone thinks. Now that might be way off what is taught at other schools, and I really love the input, but here is the kicker :P While publishing another story I only used " and got complaints that dialogue was hard to keep up with. I am happy to experiment with different methods, it's just that this works for me =) but the readers are those who matter
Date: May 20 2014 1:15 PM Title: Weather
Some good character introduction.