Reviews For The Jewelry Case
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Reviewer: TheFilthyHarlot Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures

I love it. It's not paced too fast, or too slow. It's believable. I can't wait for chapter 2.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 16 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures

Superb. Can't wait for the next addition!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures

This has some definite promise.

Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures

Amazing! I wonder... is it possible for Nina to vary the sizes of the people as she pleases? I'm thinking like.. maybe would it be be possible to make them so small that there is, say, an entire city in the box? Also, I may have missed it, but how old is Nina? I caught that she's younger than the senior, but by how much?



Author's Response:

I havent written it as such yet, but once I've made it past the story outline I have so far I could certainly make it so. The idea crossed my mind, and I think it would be a good way to expand the story scope. As for her age, I haven't exactly pegged it down anywhere other than being on the lower end of the age category. Tis the sort of thing I'll leave up to the reader's preference and the story's progression. 

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