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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2014 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 14

Whoa, whoa, whoa! Two new shrinking machines?!! Tom is back?!! Shrunk to under 3 inches?!!!

This opens up a new door full of possibilties!

Will Sherri show Tom to the contestants? If yes, Andy needs to talk to him.

Also, the biggest takeaway is the shriniking machine in the house! I mean where is it? The main room? A bedroom? A bathroom?

I bet Sherri put it somewhere.

If this was Betty's idea, it was brilliant. Now she can interfere with the contestants without having a competition.

Also, is the shrinking machine in the house set to 3 inches? That would be awesome.

I could picture Carla and Andy deciding to take a bath together. Since Carla is taller, she goes to get some things while Andy starts the water. Then he shrinks to 3 inches in the tub, and he cant escape since he is too short. Then Carla shows up, and...well... you know what happens then.

Is the next chapter about the contestents going to bed? Maybe Vera trying to control Paul? Hailey dominates Jerry, or we can have round 2 of Carla and Andy.

But seriously, this new shrinking machine in the house is the most important thing to me right now. It literally changes everything. Haha, Betty might shrink the whole group and have 8 little 3 inch people crawl on her.

Then Sherri invites her season one people and shrinks them to 3 inches.

Then Betty and Sherri have a 15-some with 3 inch tinies.

Ok, nevermind that, it seems too bizarre to picture 15 tiny people on two giant women.

I got this crazy idea of Sherri sneaking into the house at 3 am, and shrinking soemone and using them for an hour, and then put them back in bed so that contestant thinks that is a nightmare. Well, she still has Tom though.

Hey Benton, with more talk about season one people, i think it would be recomended to let the readers know that they should read season 1.

ok, so now there are 3 shrinking machines.

This story got so much better!

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Yes, from this point on a person can be shrunk from pretty much anywhere. Going into the shrinking booth is no longer required! We'll see how the Contestants take that news...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 25 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 14

Wham! Tom comes back, and something happens that I did not expect.

@TomSpeedy: It's just that site. For other stories I like, check out my favourites, and use the Wayback Machine to find Carrie's Science Project.



Author's Response:

Yes indeed, Tom is back for a visit.

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