[Report This]Date: July 28 2014 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
First, i checked out your deviant art favorites, and they are amazing! Now i can see what your truly like in your writing. If you were a good artist, I know you will have some crazy good ideas to make.
Also, on your blog, Im looking forward to season 3,4 and 5 of the shrunking show, and the "Shrinking U" idea seems very interesting as well.
Actually, they are all interesting, but those ideas/stories are the ones im looking forward to read.
One of my favorite topics that i enjoy reading are the "girl finds and shrinks random guy story, and she plays with him with a bit of cruelty. She plays with him in her house and thats the setting most of the time. Then the only sexy person in the house would be the mother and she is the gentle but sexy type." (Just another idea. :) Carla reminds me of that dominant soman who is also caring. Thats what sparked my interest in MILfs recently.)
As for the chapter 15, wow, now Hailey is losing her support. This means that Carla has to be next in line for the throne! Dale is too weak anyway. The future will be awesome.
That sex scene though. I thought the fling that Andy and Carla had was creative, but this was special. A one-eight person with Carla, wow. Andy sure got a show. Like him, I also would have Carla all to myself, but Marie showed Andy what he could possibly do at that size.
Then Andy slept on top of Carla and Marie on top of him. Talk about sleeping with women. That is the new definition of that phrase.
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I follow a lot of really good GTS artists on DeviantArt, you should definitely check them out. I might blog about my favorites on my new blog sometime.
I'm not sure which story ideas that I've presented I would work on first, and when that would be. I tend to be the laziest son of a bitch alive most of the time, punctuated by short bursts of productivity. The Shrinking Show, while created over two years, was not created "a little bit at a time", but in something like 4 or 5 great thrusts with a little dabbling here and there.
I enjoy the whole "girl finds and shrinks random guy and plays with him" setup, but after well over a decade reading those kinds of stories it has become a bit of a tired trope for me. I still enjoy the setup, but it needs a little something more for me; either a twist, or an extra factor that adds a new dimension to the experience. However, one of my story ideas does use that setup quite a bit.
Yes, the sex scene was a lot of fun...but will it lead to complications? We will see.
[Report This]Date: July 26 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
Paul just keeps on sinking. I can see him breaking eventually.
And we now have a threesome, and one where the man is in the middle sizewise. This is another unusual sexual adventure.
Author's Response:
It's always fun to do something different with the size configurations in sex scenes like this! And yes, Paul is not doing well.