Date: January 31 2015 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
By reading reviews, It seems readers considers Judy did not know Nancy's attitude for Scott But I stongly doubt abt that.
Author's Response:
Judy may be aware of more than she's letting on, which we'll see very soon.
Date: January 30 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I guess I'm another of the shrinking violets about the abuse. I just don't read it as erotica anymore, it makes me more disgusted and enraged, especially with Judy and now Nancy. Major kudos to you as a writer because I really, really want to keep reading to see if everyone gets their just desserts, even if I'm not really here for the gtsplay anymore.
Author's Response:
That's fair. Certainly I don't mean to fetishize rape itself, and in general, not everything in this story is meant to be viewed as erotica. Thanks for soldiering on all the same; there will be some repercussions of Nancy's actions here later on.
Date: January 30 2015 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
By the way, how many chap are left?
Author's Response:
Four
Date: January 30 2015 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Ok, anyway you look at it, this was rape. Is there no one to stand up for poor Scott? Instinctively I want to say his mother, but she seems to be too focused on her political ambitions and never really listens to Scott. I'm still waiting for Scott to finally break in a way that not even his mother can ignore. I can easily see that if things don't go well with his meeting with Ella, that with all hope lost, that he might start making some attempts on his life.
Author's Response:
It's a good point you raise that Scott is almost out of reasons to go on here, and it will definitely be addressed as we reach the final chapters. Rest assured there will be a good reason for Scott to still be around in the seventh story of this series, and thanks for reviewing!
Date: January 25 2015 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Good I agree with riczar's view about Maggie. But I find normal tht Nancy takes adventage of Scott's current state of mind. After all she is psychopath!!!!
Author's Response:
Nancy is definitely the kind of predator to take advantage of a situation.
Date: January 25 2015 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I think for Maggie, its fun only when its temporary. I think at the end of the day she wants her BIG brother back. Kyle probably understands the implications and the "slippery slope" that I indicated in my last comment. Today in the USA, just about everyone breaks a law at least once a day and never knows it, because the law has become so complicated. A bit disappointed that there were no explanations in this chapter, and no Ella yet. I can't believe Nancy went ahead with the sexual play despite the condition Scott is in.
Still anxious to see what life will look like for a non-incarcerated shrinkee. Meaning once its determined that Scott has served his time, but remains shrunk, will his treatment remain the same (i.e. slave/pet status)? What kind of rights will he have? What kind of life does he have to look forward to? If Ella wanted to make up with him, could they marry, have kids, could he get a job? Would Judy even allow him out of her "protection"?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. There will be more about Judy's plans in the final couple of chapters, and Ella will be appearing a few posts from now. One thing to keep in mind is that although Judy is making a definitive statement of her vision of the justice system, it's by no means being put in place yet - she still has obstacles to bypass. In theory, the permanently shrunken people would still retain their rights, albeit with their safety at the discretion of their guardian. Scott could also, in theory, marry and have kids, but Judy is clearly not one to let what's hers go very easily.
[Report This]Date: January 02 2015 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
The masses clamor for a conclusion to Julia =)
Author's Response: Apparently!
[Report This]Date: January 02 2015 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Even though I'm more of a gentle person, I love the way you create your characters as individuals with compelling personalities instead of just another tiny to be squashed/eaten/used as a dildo et cetera.
And sorry for asking, but will you continue Julia when this story is over? That cliffhanger was GoT-esque :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, and I appreciate your comment about my characters. I honestly do plan to work a bit with Julia soon-ish, though there are other stories that will probably end up coming first.
Date: December 23 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Amazing work as always Jack. Keep it up. This and Julia are my main insperasaions!!
off topic though but when will we see the final act of Julia begin?
Author's Response:
Thanks much. I'm still not sure when Act 4 is coming, but it probably won't be until after this story and a couple others are finished.
Date: December 13 2014 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
don't zephilla, I highly doubt Maggie turn from current state to 'gentle' one like Libby!
Date: December 12 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Thank you, jack. Meanwhile I just the revealing chapter 'breaking amends'
Author's Response:
That's a good chapter to get you caught up.
Date: December 12 2014 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Do u want me to read the whole last story to find out Kyle's Grugde vs Scott?!Seriously Come on , it's easy to tell me what was about directly!Ok, as I just read 1st chapter of last story, I guess driving drunk, Right?
Author's Response:
I invite you to read it if you want, though I really do try to write these stories so readers can basically follow what happens without seeing the others. You're right about the reason for Kyle's grudge.
Date: December 12 2014 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I didn't get why Scott said sorry to Kyle. Excuse me I didn't reed previous 'time-out'. Did Maggie ajustment attitude start now by making this call? Or It"s gonna happens in Time out 7?
Author's Response:
Kyle's still holding a grudge for Scott's crime in the last story; that's really all the context you need here. Maggie's not changing her tune yet. There are still 9 chapters left to go in this one.
Date: November 29 2014 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I bagan to hate Maggie, hope something or somebody soften her toward scott
Author's Response:
Maggie may be getting an attitude adjustment soon.
Date: November 22 2014 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I dont understand why there's the New World Order tag already, even if Shrink act law passed. PMRD use are yet limited
Author's Response:
That's a fair question. I used the tag because the law has started to fundamentally alter the justice system, and in general the public is attuned to be content with shrinking punishments, even cruel ones. That was sort of the reasoning behind it, even if the world itself hasn't had society flipped on its head (yet).
[Report This]Date: November 21 2014 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
You sure know how to make people wait. I'm really eager to finally see Scott meeting Ella...if he gets to at all. ;o
Author's Response:
He will see her eventually, but there may be a couple more hurdles between then and now...
[Report This]Date: November 17 2014 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Just don't ruin maggie. I love her character's development. She is one of my all time favorites. Keep up the great work. does I just hope this doesn't mean Maggie will get nicer from what you said. I cannot wait to see where you take this series (hoping there are more sequels).
Author's Response:
There will definitely be more sequels. Maggie does have a bit of a development coming up near the end of this story, though it's not to say things are instantly going to turn sunshine-and-roses between her and Scott.
[Report This]Date: November 17 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I just hope that shift isn't from oh look at how nast she (maggie or judy) is now and my she is actually trying to return scott to normal change. Or that Maggie might fall in love with her brother type of change. If there is a change I kind of widh it to be darker since I cannot see maggie or Jusy ever being "gentle" to scott. And yess the explanation of the use you had for the repeated use of to makes since. I just get the feeling there is a better phrase. I also hope that the change you might give them will not be dramatic. I like the characters and hope they keep most of there personalities. Also as I said before it seems to me that Maggie is the darker between Judy and herself.
Author's Response:
I'm hoping not to spoil what's coming, though this story is definitely meant to represent a turning point for some of the characters. Nobody's going to be falling in love with anybody, but there will be a mix of positive/negative turns at the end that will make sense in light of some of the events of the climax. All I'll say for now is that you may change your mind about who's the darker person in Scott's life by story's end. ;)
[Report This]Date: October 23 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Hmmm, the guy on TV has a connection with Scott, and he recognized the face. More importantly, Scott's mom recognized the face, so we know that this person on TV will be a major factor soon.
Different clothes? Then u mention waterproof? Hmmm. And she says this right after she strokes his torso. That sequence just sparks so many ideas that it's fun to keep guessing what it all means.
I guess I won't know until the next chapter. I can't wait!
Author's Response:
He will indeed be a factor soon, and certainly more so in the next story.
Whatever it means, it's more than likely not something very fun for Scott. ;)
Date: October 15 2014 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I really hope he gets to see Ella sooner or later.