Date: October 09 2014 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Good stuff as usual, though does this mean no Omega update today?
Author's Response:
It does mean that, sorry. I alternate posts between this and Omega, though, so the next one will be from that.
[Report This]Date: September 30 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Absolutely amazing. This has definitely become one of my favorite stories. The way his mother handles him is incredible. I have to say I hope we see her eventually cross the line and force some unexpected pleasure out of our little hero for her own fun.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! There may be some line crossing before the story is over, though probably not in a way you're expecting.
Date: September 10 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
another great chapter! When will maggie be making her way back into the story?
Author's Response:
Thanks! Maggie will appear again next chapter.
[Report This]Date: September 10 2014 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Nice
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: August 31 2014 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
As as Maggie is concerned, was Scott so bad to her to warrant that treatment? I'm thinking back to another of your stories where a brother is shrunk and the sister treats him badly for years, but turns out that she had some form of misplaced affection for him, declaring that he belonged to her.
With Judy, you're screwing with my mind now. All other instances we've seen of Judy, she's been mentally and physically abusing her son. Not out of any apparent malice, but she seems to derive some pleasure from his abuse. In this chapter, she's all mommy sweetness now. Acting as a mother should. To protect and comfort her son.
I have a feeling things will go back to normal tomorrow. I wish that it wouldn't. Its moments like this chapter that I like best.
Author's Response:
I'm hesitant to give too much away about Maggie. I will say she does have better reason than Carly to do what she does, though there are still several underlying factors that have damaged her to the point that she's willing to treat him like that.
Judy is acting all mommy-sweetness for a particular reason, though it won't last forever.
Date: August 20 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
This is truthfully my favourite series on here. You write with a brilliant, well-composed sense of style and description; I eagerly await each chapter day and night, so thank you for keeping me on the edge of my seat.
Personally, I'm more of a fan of the Judy chapters--I find the dominance she has over her son so incredibly sexy--but it is your story, so I look forward to the twists and turns that will unfold.
Thank you very much, Jacksmith!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate your comment on my writing. There will still be plenty more Judy throughout the rest of the story, so I hope you enjoy that as well.
Date: August 20 2014 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
That was . . . confusing and a huge departure from her usual treatment of Scott. It actually seems like she . . . cares. I don't know if this is momentary lapse of hers, or she's a schizo. The only conclusion I can come up with is that Scott's been behaving himself, acting in a manner that she thinks he should, and even "affectionately". He's being rewarded with being treated almost human. I remain cautious as things can always flip in an instant. I was kind of hoping that Scott could have some quality time with Maggie's friend. I get the warm fuzzies everytime a little guy is treated nicely and affectionately.
Author's Response:
Scott's equally confused. All I'll say is that there's a reason for every action Judy takes; she's pretty calculating, and almost always has some kind of agenda. And Scott will get some warm-fuzzy time with Maggie's friend later on in the story.
Date: August 11 2014 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks. It'll be posted soon.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2014 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I do enjoy this series and how he is a tiny little toy for women's stinky feet. I think you've established the universe by which these characters act and relate to one another. I'm not sure why after 5 other installments of the family crushing and punishing him, a few readers would complain about the cruelty and ask you to tone it down. It's not a gentle story so please don't succumb to any requests that fundamentally go against your vision for these characters. I truly hope Judy forces her feet to do unspeakable things to Scott.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing. There will be some gentle content in this story, though most of the action will still be focused on intensive foot (and mouth) interaction, as it was with past installments. And Scott will be back with Judy's feet in a couple chapters.
Date: August 01 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Im hoping that the shower buddies reference was more than just her teasing him.
Author's Response:
I guess we'll have to wait and see...
Date: July 31 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I think if I lived in this universe and wasn't a macrophile, I'd have prefered prison a million times over being a tiny possession to a family like his! At least in prison I'd get to keep a little dignity!
Author's Response:
I'm sure Scott is sharing that same sentiment.
[Report This]Date: July 27 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Two questions:
Will we ever see Judy shrink Maggie? Previous stories have implied she has been shrunk too.
And since we know Judy does care for her son even if she likes shrinking with him, what's the line she wouldn't cross and what are the guidelines and limits she gives Maggie when having her fun with Scott?
I really enjoy this series, l look forward to future chapters!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Maggie has actually not been shrunken by Judy before (for a fairly specific reason), though I can't say it won't happen at some point down the road. Judy's limits generally revolve around trying to keep Scott from being permanently harmed, hence why she doesn't want Maggie wearing him during games, though she has no problem with him being humiliated beyond belief if he's not being physically injured by it.
Date: July 27 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Two questions:
Will we ever see Judy shrink Maggie? Previous stories have implied she has been shrunk too.
And since we know Judy does care for her son even if she likes shrinking with him, what's the line she wouldn't cross and what are the guidelines and limits she gives Maggie when having her fun with Scott?
I really enjoy this series, l
[Report This]Date: July 17 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
You should make a story in which scotts brother is shrunk too. I wonder if Maggie would treat her younger brother better than she treats scott
Author's Response:
That's going to happen in the next story. I won't spoil, but Maggie definitely does treat her shrunken brothers differently.
[Report This]Date: July 16 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I'm glad to see a new chapter because this has become my favourite series on the site.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
I'm not gonna lie I'm a little disappointed that Judy won't make an appearance for a couple more chapters. I hate to say it but Maggie's character annoys me.(I may be alone in that respect) However, I will still be tuning in to this story because I'm intrigued by how vague your description was. Wish I had my normal positive things to say but I'm feeling less and less inclined to please people these days... I am glad Ella will be making an appearance haven't heard from her in awhile. Anyways I'm looking forward to see where this story goes from here.
aaron
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Judy should be appearing by the fifth chapter.
Date: July 15 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Ok, I've been a bit busy in the last weeks, but still I can't believe that while I'm reading the shrink act files you've already finished that and even started two new stories...
Happy next-few-days to me!
Author's Response: Happy days indeed. You better catch up quickly! Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Great chapter and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
Ah Maggie, one of your greatest creations.
Good stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Date: July 15 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: MVP
11 months before he MIGHT get parole. Ouch. No visiting friends? I thought you implied in the comments that his girlfriend would make an appearance at some point. With the treatment he's getting, I'm suprised he doesn't have any serious injuries. Good writing as always.
Author's Response: His girlfriend will be showing up later on in the story. It's a good point you make about potential injuries; the best explanation I have is that Maggie's spent enough of her life being able to have Scott in her shoe that she can do it without permanently hurting him now.