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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2014 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 10: Nancy's Proposal

I'm not sure what to think... I'd write he's **** up more than ever if I didn't know you, but even that seems unlikely :)

Yet for some reason I'm still thinking of Judy: either she doesn't care, or she lets her guard down with her friends (yeah, sure), or she wants him to be looking for mommy - any other idea?

 

PS

Ella! Doesn't she realize how much not answering sounds like the worst possible answer?

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 10: Nancy's Proposal

Ah poor Scott, you kind of feel bad for him but then remember what he did.

Reviewer: socksarecool Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 10: Nancy's Proposal

This chapter is amazing. I feel like this is a tease of things to come(No pun intended). 

This story looks like it will be the best one in the time-out series(They're all very good).

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